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Raz Vs Young Hercule$
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I spit first no dickrydin ...ect...votes Make it Quik too... I'll spit first.... 12Lines (6Barz) Min and Max Good Luck |
young hercules, dawg quit rappin and go back-to-pegasis//
fuck rappin i'mma go "wwe" on this nigga and suplex-this-kid// fuck if u hercules then call me zeus, ur my-bastard-child// nah i take that back, this bitch ain't got ne relation to me, he-can't-freestyle// u say ur from neverland so did u get fucked by michael-jackson// but u say ur from tha-island-man, is that ur coverup from all-of-ur-sexual-action// only money u ever see is in yo lame-ass-sign-on// could have ne name u want but lets see u chose a greek heroes dick to-be-rydin-on// this niggaz dumb as fuck, thinkin he on drugs lookin through-a-colidascope// and to tha viewers, look at his piece of shit, click Raz at tha top thats were u-direct-yo-vote// yo i could stop right here give u unlimit amount of barz and still demolish-ya-text// infact i might, my words are scared around u, u bitin, u need to quit-yo-molest// this bitch likes to procrastinate just look at his record, he always-wants-to-win but never-does// i'm gonna aniliate like oj did to his bitch, do-u-comprehend, bitch i ain't gonna wear-no-gloves// Yo here ya go i fixed tha brackets *Throws Young tha Mic* damn i wish shit coulda been longer thou........oh well get yo rap on....... |
idk how hard hercules'll cum...but hopefully it wuz harder than raz's shit....i seen better outt raz....neway....uppin for votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61876
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yeah hopefuly he'll respond tonght......but neways thanx fo tha help dawg........lol be back to vote on it aight,,,,
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dayuuuuum./.........kid don't get on do he......foreal herc u see this post dawg......characters....
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Raz your lines didn't really rhyme, but I ain't seen Young Hercules yet so I ain't gonna vote.
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huh what part don't rhyme? when there is a - inbetween u say it together.......foreal what part don't rhyme?
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FUCK IT, HEY I HOPE A MOD, PEEPS THIS, I'M CLOSING THIS SHIT NOW......HE AIN'T GONNA RESPOND.....................
SHIT IS CLOSED...... |
yo man hold ya fuckin horses he'll be there he just told me to tell you that no diss ( i'm on tha phone wit him)
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aight man, i just don't want no prewrittin shit, i mean common u could tell him my shit and he got time to write and rewrite his shit to me then post it....shit ain't fair dude....
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pretty hot freestyle but don't put the stuff that rhymes in brackets, it looks too sloppy
I'll try and vote when the other guy drops his lyrics |
Aight he comin on right now he said********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
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Yo ***Picks up tha mic***( that shit cool)
Raz you can just Kiss my Ass why tha hell you talkin' bout me when ya rhymes stinks like you... fuckin trash!!// ya avatar is hot, but ya punchlines not, I would hate to put you on tha spot, but you fuckin stink so I ma let ya rot, Man im smokin yo ass like pot// in this Ima Evil maxwell "This womans work" is sraight fuckin dirt and it stinks like a terd made by a fuckin herb, or a white ass nerd you just like Malibu's most wanted, smokin paper instead of chronic, ya vocab is weak are you hook on phonics//ha ha you can tell by tha welts I put on ya ass I got all tha gold belts you need to go to charter wit that shit even ya rhymes need help// (that's tha kill) Yo man I don't want to spit no mo cuz I gettin sick ( i'm 2 ill ) |
im w/ cameron on this one. Raz u got some nice stuff but really... the brakets just make me wanna not read it.
it hurts mah head d00d. but other than that its all good. Wish i could vote! Vote Raz on this one ppl. |
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