Multies for those ..Confused PeeP
 

where the dashes are indicats the multi

You Dudes Imitations-Scoreless when Battling An Affiliation-Morbid
This Generations-Horrid So Dont Front BeCause The Fake-Get-Tortured
These Relentless-Tactics Leave Heads-Knocked You Simplistic-Bastards
Get Left Dead-shot Cause My Sadistic-Actions Got Shit Twisted And Dread-Locked
See My Infectious-Message Brings Hell And Teaches Lessons-To-Ell
Specially you cats who seem like yourStarving-For-Pussy Like Anorexics-In-Jail
While Im Reigning-Ferocious Draining-Kids-Hopeless Claiming-My-Notions
But Aint Remaining This Potent And Would only Be Mind blowing if there Brains were-Explosives
Maiming-Broads Who Always Complain-n-Stall with Chains-In-Saws
Freezing-Your-Skull And Beating Your Head Till Your Brain-Defrost
It’ll Be A Lot Of Painful-Awes But I’ll Still Maintain-Abroad
Dropping So Much That It Rains-Applauds Till These Lames-Dissolve
See My Raw-Adjectives Have Been Known To Cause-Accidents
And Maul-Establishments Till Their Only Existence Crawls under Cracked-Cement

now that's what I'm talking about...Don't drop no limp noodles in my threds...but you don't need dashes to indicate a multi...will you insert a dash on a mic?...naw, you rhyme with pauses and wordplay and if you have to show them in your written then you look like you're new to this...but your lyrics get respect in my book so I know you aint no newbie...but it still doesn't give you a valid reason to yam in my thread...peace

man you shoulda made it longer namean...enjoyin it though...nice drop...wait till you see my new multies verses that will be comin soon...wahid

usually i dont use dashes anymore im past that stage but i seen people struggling with multis so i had to make it obvious man

Some Of Your So Called "Multis" Were Syllable Incorrect To Actually Be Called Multis...Some Weren't Even Mulits At All...

But As Far As the Piece Went It Was Nice And It Had A Nice On-Point Rhythm...

Just Thought I'd Speak My Mind Seeing As I Am Suppose To Do Some Work In This Here Open Mic Forum... :rolleyes: