[ Tangled Image ]
 

From Demise To Birth And Birth To My Demise...
Ressurection,Like Jesus,My Body Disappears Then My Soul Rises...
Not Wanting To Come Back Because I've Accomplished Everything I Wanted...
God Chose Me To Take The Challenge,Not Afraid Of Death I Finish The Tasks DauntLess...
I Suddenly Hear Gods Powerful Voice Telling Me To Stay As Long As I Want...
Go n Visit Everyone Who Witnessed My Death n Filled Their Hearts With Daunt...
Shot In The Back 5 Times,With Witnesses But No One Would Help...
Got Kill'd Tryna Save Their Asses..I Shoulda Kept To MySelf...
Showin Up At Their Door With A Big Trench Coat And Dark Shades...
Threatening Them With Death By Showcasing Guns And Razor-Blades...
Ressurected From The Dead To Do Good But Commiting Demon-Like Sins...
Back For Revenge,Can't Be Killed Becuz You're Strength Is Greater Than The Average Men...
One Way To Get Rid Of You But No One Knows...
Torturing People Who Upset You And Killing Your Foes...
Came To Do Grace Earths Pastures With The Touch Of An Angel...
God Thought He Was Good But He Had His Image Tangled...

Wrote This 1 Night When I Was Bored

Uppin...

Too Much Sleepin Medicine..Stop Sleepin

This Was ALright nd I hought You Were N Demik For A Minute But That Changed Now...This Was Alright Though From Start To Finish..Reply Back Peace

Umm...Uppin

it was nice...........it went together well............

can't really pick out a line that stood out to me cause it went together well as a whole..........keep droppin'

thats nice yo

^^^Hah Thas Why U Got Banned...For Bullshit Post Like That

But Anyway...Thx For The Feedback

Written in a kind of simple yet well put together way. I man you also had a certain amount of complexity to it too.

And the meaning was strong, emphasised by how you ended it.

I felt some words here and there were mis-placed. And also at times blunt when there was no need to be.

But yeah, overall...a nice piece..

..resp...

Thx:)