A rap song by me
 

"KILLER INSIDE"
VERSE 1:
yo smack is whack, it seems to me that your mom smoked crack,cuz you got no rap,whats comin outta your mouth sounds like crap, get with it b**ch,your a wangsta,a f**kin snitch,you dont wanna come around me, cuz that fast action motion coming is my fist you see,do you know what im saying,you hear me right,the pounds that im packing are Super tight,oh youre scared now?,hold up, dont "lose yourself",cuz "testing me is bad for your health",watchout!
CHORUS:
when you see me around and you call me names,i just want you to know i dont play no games,so when you see me again dont talk to me,i dont want my mom to look at me and see,that there's a killer inside.
VERSE 2:
Man you should be scared, i just want you to know that i never cared,about you either,and as for your friends,i dont like them neither,youre all pansy,pussy ass bitches,you heard me before youre all f**king snitches,so what is the matter,youre still tryin to look strong,i am gonna hurt you did you get me all wrong?,youre biting your nails and sweating too,youre afraid of me,and im not of you,now stop looking at me and turn around,or sooner or later you be on the ground.
CHORUS X2 to fade

Just tell me what you think.

It ain' bad...could use some work, but still, it's not bad dawg...