A Lil Off My Chest...Rather Simple
 

I Got Mad Flows And
Even If Your Rainman
Was Jesus You Couldnt
Fuc With These Shits Drainin
Flows Like Kitchen Sinks For
Oceans Now You Wanna Serve
Love Like US Open I'm Flippin
Proposals Nervous Plan To
Rain And Shine Deliver
Sickness Daily Like A Postal
Service From Mornng To
Evening So Read A Book
And Find God In A Cell Block
Behind Bars When Im Speakin
Dont Shake My Hand Say Whats
Up Or Call Me Dunn Till Im
AFinished Leavin Someone With
An Absetmind Speech Passified
My Main Objectives Readin Your
Sorry Ass From Front To Back
Even Peepin The Worthless
Classifieds For The Fact That I
Dont Like You Perhaps You Just
Stoped Askin Why Hopefully You
Found A Fix To Kill Your Time Until
You Dont Exist....I Leave A Light
Bulb Diminished Demented No
Whisper No Flicker Last Words
Apply For All Fake G's A Big
Fuck You Im Finished

~Content~

People Are Stingy About Returning The Favors About Replyin To Posts En This Forum Here...No Matter What The Rules May Be....

Once I figured out where the lines should be at, it was an alright piece. The format just fucked it all up for me though. Clean it up a little and ya might get more replies... Peace.

How ABout When Someone Posts
Something You Just Read It And
Catch the Rhyme..
Its Done For A Reason And Many
Do The Same Thing

N Demik For Example

Thank You For Replying Though

pretty decent shit if u ask me...

As you said, some simple shit, but it was cool.

Good flow throughout the whole piece, didn't get choppy anywhere.

Cool lyrics.. Nothing really stood out as dope to me, but its straight.

Stay up.

standard shit....competant, definantly, but no real bombs. you could get on the radio with shit like that, but it needs to be cleaned up. i shouldn't have to work to figure out the text.
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All You Have To Do Is Read And The Flows There

Reading Is Fundamental..Tanks If You Did

Up And Away

Taking Flight Someone Reply

Emhhh BASIC nothin stood out really Nice contend Nice drop....enuff said

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^^peep Mine