latin invasion
 

saticify rage-with certified HITs on page-
resite it on stage- enraged with enemies in~range-then engage-
to shit on a thousand names-
like i wiped my ass with a phone book page-
but if you say your verse a dime then it's only worth change

NONCENTZ the deranged-
make your crew look week..... by ripping on them 168 ways-
with hourly rates for 7 days-
with no delay-just alot of busten and cats being sprayed-
the only hustle you got was when it was relayed-that you front on every thing you claim and say-

no hesitation you see de~feet like being tramped-on -i stay charged with the amp-on
flows make crowds ill.... period... like a minstrol cramps/to tampon-

i gave love even when cats hated-
now i leave them erradicated-
by steppen my style up now im elivated-
above them leaven em stamped... my technique , they defeat is post dated-then reanimated-
same era where spanish was slated- to have invaded-

IM HERE NOW....YA HODISTE- ODISTE?
escucha- su hijo de putas-

my mic potency-is quivicably-in coherency-
with content of licidc,acidic compounds in lsd-
so you hallusinating if you battle me and saw victory-
fuck blacken out on the M-I-C-lyricaly-
i been sunnen(sonnen) an ECLIPSE since 1990 like MITSUBISHI-

write your hardest punchline to your knuckles....and it still wont land-
if i spit a rhyme the crowd.......
would become dependent to the compounds.....
of my saliva glands-
every label would want me but i got my own brand-
to punchlines and fill every other rhyme with back hands-

NONCENTZ the bastard child of RUTHLESS and WARLORDS-
compared to what i compose-
other rappers is clueless,only worth a snores-
even if u overdosed on NO DOSE-
case closed-

uppin

you nice with it kid..... i like it!

Not bad, lines were a bit short but you had ok vocab.

Peace

Pretty damn good...8/10. Good job, dawg. Could ya return the favor?

"Real Life" Gangsta One
"Go Gangsta on the Bitch" Gangsta One

of coarse thank you

Give Him Some Critical Feedback, Something That Might Help Him Improve!

aight:

The First Verse, Flowed Nice, Had Good Multi's, Started The Joint Off Nicely...

The Next Three Stanza's Were 2 Of The Best, They Had Capital Vocab And Wordplay, Had Relevant Meaning. Really Took The Piece To A New Level!

Frommy mic potency to like MITSUBISHI-. This Verse Had The Best Wordplay, It Was Brutal Dawg, Vocab As Well Was Luminous!

Overall: I'll Give This a 8/10, You Could Have Made The Concept More Clear, But Still, It Was A Dope Piece!

your absolutely right i was so quick to try and do this the subject felt a lil faint i wish i could rework it now thanks for the feedback you were very observent

^^n/p Dawg^^

In My View, Peeps Who Reply With 5 Word Answers, Don't Give A Fuck About Your Piece, There Either Doing Two Things..

1.Replying To Make You Feel Obligated And Need To Return The Favour Immediatly On There Piece!
2. Doing It To Get There Piost Count Up!

good point

"my mic potency-is quivicably-in coherency-
with content of licidc,acidic compounds in lsd-
so you hallusinating if you battle me and saw victory-"

"by ripping on them 168 ways-
with hourly rates for 7 days-
with no delay-just alot of busten and cats being sprayed-"

"resite it on stage- enraged with enemies in~range-then engage"


^those lines were ILL.... dawg, you elevatin' alot yourself, I like that style for you on the real... keep it comin'..

i liked it had a nice flow, im uppin for sure good drop

peep the other peace if you can