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liquid transportations, summoners of magical implantations//
spherical relations to the round burning sensation//
of the 4 horsemen's aviation//
declined faith of the wraith who takes the pain spreads it, then contiminates//
camel aches, from the journey of the deserts, which hold the secrets of spiritual weapons//

Shiznit's Thoughts:

alright...what are you actually trying to accomplish with this??^^


The fact that these lines could be a PART of a masterpiece....why post it undone....?

its either ur thinking that its very stylish to have a 5 liner piece so u posted it up on open mic or its either u just want others to know if this lines would be really interesting for you to start a piece...

in my views...these lines are very very interesting..i mean the whole idea was brilliant but the fact that i was dissappointed i mean like i was readin and i wanna read more and i was very anxious of whats next... i was like.."is that it?" *shakes head*

but anyways...i liked these lines...but think about what i said about using these as part of whole big one..then post it again...

that was nice