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from my tryoutz

illest metaphorical mind frames of a genius
exceptional intellectual originality = seamless
drop'n bars of st8 skillz as i pick up my dolla billz
now that i got my ass some millz im headed 4 tha hillz
knowledge of non physical extra terestrial life forms
that preform human acts and transform into " man" form
government plains are known only as numbers like area 51
they real and are used to hold aircraft parts recreational fun
but its deeper than that....thats just an off branch of reality
them muthafuckas try to keep us in a none of your biz mentality
occward,...cuz theres muthafuckas lookin like us underground
10% body water ,and speak with anti-matter-waves of sound
a reverse effect in the human brains cerebral cortex
makeing it impossible to transmit after the waves create a vortex
enough of dat 4 now, give me a mic and i'll attract fans like magnets
place niggas in bracketz, spit flows that break a nigga glasses
engeniusly i go threw mytoses, produce cell division, and grow another self
hottness times 2 so i know i'll never get left on the shelf

Shiznit's Thoughts:

hmmm...based on what ive read from you so far *ahem* 'anti-matter'...hehe ;)...i really liked this one...


i had to do this cuz its fun breaking down and shit...*shakes head*..cuz im the only one who doin it so here it goes


VOCABULARY

>good choice of words...BRILLIANT!....some of the words correlate one another and thats a cool ish...

i.e.
"engeniusly i go threw mytoses, produce cell division, and grow another self
hottness times 2 so i know i'll never get left on the shelf"

^^^^see those words im talking about?? madd nice!

FLOW

>very very smooth its like its way perfect to fit the piece...readin out loud makes it even better....i liked it

WORDPLAY

>"occward,...cuz theres muthafuckas lookin like us underground
10% body water ,and speak with anti-matter-waves of sound
a reverse effect in the human brains cerebral cortex
makeing it impossible to transmit after the waves create a vortex"

^^^^enough said...that was hott!

CONTENT

>very creative...it showed really how talented the writer is..hehe

OVERALL

>anti matter rocks! LOL

i wanna see more drops aight?

iight thanx you i'll drop some more sick shyt since you understand the flow most people dont so they just go to then next nigga but the next 1 ill drop will be full blown skillz 4 sho

thanx shiznit

yo dawg.. I agree we'd amke an ill tag team... that was mad nice..

illest metaphorical mind frames of a genius
exceptional intellectual originality = seamless... that was ill.. right off the start...

but its deeper than that....thats just an off branch of reality
them muthafuckas try to keep us in a none of your biz mentality
occward.... that was ill too...

your flow and style are alot like mine.. but you got a totally diff style all together as well, which is dope.. we need to collab on tha real.. 1

4 sho we need to drop some shyt soon too my nigga
ill p.m you right now

uppin