Please tell me what you think!
 

“What Do I Do?”
CHORUS:
why do you love me like you do?,
what is it that i have?,
what do i do, to make you stay with me?.
VERSE 1:
what do i do baby gurl,you can tell me now,our love is so strong it doesnt matter anyhow,i hope what i do is caressing you,or even better yet being there for you,i try my best lil mama you know thats true,i cant give you the world but at least i love you,id do anything,learn another language for you,like yo quiero tu` y necissito tu`!
CHORUS X2
i know sometimes i can be a hassal,but girl i am your prince,i will climb that castle,and be there when you need me,thats cool,i just love how your eyes shine,but i love it more when you eyes meet mine,theres something bout your look,something bout your stare,something bout your body,something bout your hair.
i cant help but look when youre wearing those clothes you wear, the pleasure it puts me through gurl that just isnt fair,i want you,i need you!
CHORUS X2


i know it isnt a rap, it's alot more like hip hop but still. please tell me what you think, longer im sure and needs a better ryme setup im thinking.

kid u gotta elevate.....BIG time,
no hate tho, keep workin at it......

thanx i deff know

here ill post this now cuz i cant post a new thread.

the shit that i spit is making you quit,
youre already dumb and illiterate,
im taking this feeling and im making it mine,
and saving it for you til the end time,
when i see you again its gonna be hot,
and loud too when you hear that gun shot,
you wont think im lyin when you hear your mom cryin,
saying what did he do to you and your crew,
its such a shame that we play this thug game,
now where do i go, when they know it was me,
when the evidence is right there for them to see,
these damn bitches of this embassy, always testin me,
like somethin's wrong with me,
fuck them man i dont care what they think, i got this mans blood draining down my kitchen sink. (fuck em all!)