"Comin' Afta Ya"
 

[Intro]

(Gangsta One): "Yo..."

(Other guy): "What is it, dawg?"

(Gangsta One): "Did that nigga jus' walk outta ma house?"

(Other guy): "Huh? Hey, that son of a bitch did..! And he's holdin' ur fuckin' money man!"

(Gansta One): "That...FUCKIN'...NIGGA!"

BANG!

[Chorus]

COMIN'!//
You can' run...//
COMIN'!//
You can' hide...//
COMIN'!//
Fuck nigga I've already one...//
COMIN'!//
So jus' sit there an' FUCKIN' DIE!//
COMIN' AFTA YA!!//

[Verse 1]

Now some niggas push it real far//
Next thing they know, they gettin; shot up by someone in a car// <SCREECH!!>
Fuckin' pussys don' have the balls to face me, face-to-face//
And them pussy niggas ain' nothin' but a fuckin' disgrace//
In the 'Hood they think their King Shit o' Turd Island// <ploipl!>
'Till I be cockin' ma 9 and drive by 'em//
It's so pathetic to see 'em on the ground coverin' they head//
Well, guess what? TO BAD NIGGA U ALREADY DEAD!//
Mama's cryin' over her los' son now, it's so sad...// <Cryin' mama>
They say it's tragic when I son dies before their dad...//
Well, that's what the nigga gets fo fuckin' 'roun with my crew//
Don' blame me, thats how we do what we do...//

[ChorusX2]

[Verse 2]

Seems that the cops foun' out what I had done...//
Somebody's rattn' on me, he better run...//
I've been arrested mo times than DMX has for trafficin'//
But I've never been ratted on, how is this happenin'?//
I had to run for ma black ass' life...//
Can' go home, I would be endangerin' ma wife...//
I was gettin' mad at the worl' for betraying me...//
Why the FUCK was the worl' hating me?//
So I ran again, from the flashin' red-blue lights, I wanted to hide// <Whoooooo....>
This was some really fucked up ride//
Like a worst nightmare comes true, only worse//
I could picture in ma mind me laying in a big, black hurse//
Oh it hurts//
To see ma family to go through the worst//
Even imagining it as I'm hidin' in the shadows...//
Then I saw the river and ran for the shallows...//
I prayed to the Lord to help me through//
"I don' need anything else but You!"

[ChorusX2]

[Verse 3]

Obviously, the Lord helped me that night...//
The battle that I was about to engage was the wrong fight//
So I gave myself in and they didn't shoot me...//
And in the next couple of weeks they were through wit' me...//
The nigga I shot didn't die...//
And I said to myself: :What a lucky guy..."//

[ChorusX4]

[Outro]

(Gangsta One): "Damn..."

Yo! Feedback plz! I will review yos if u f\give me some feedback!!!!

Hey, Gangsta, I might wanna do another collab with ya

FEEDBACK DAWGZ!!!!

The Third Verse Was A Little Short, no? Only 12 Bars!

Any, The RHyming Here Was A Little Basic, BUt You Have Idea's, You Got Potential!

This Could Have Been Better With Muti's, But It Wasn't Too Bad, I Can't Wait To See You Elevate Dawg, We Should Hook Up Some Time, PM me Or Somthing!

Keep Spittin'

that shit was awesome
i hope u keep doin this shit

This Was Also Another Weak Peice..

The Whole Gangster Rap Thing On The Internet Is Pathetic.

Weak Content, Basic Rhyme Scheme, Flow Was Pretty Weak .

No Lines Had Any Content That Made Me Say "Nice" or What Not ..

Weak Peice, I Give It A 2.