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Fierce Shadow 07-03-03 07:30 PM

Fierce Shadow vs biglou323
 
check in and spit it

Fierce Shadow 07-03-03 07:45 PM

THIS IS BIGLOU'S RAP NOT MINE I'M PASTING IT HERE

Listen nigga/ I aint seen your shit before/ so before I start I predict your spittin’ is your flaw/
I’m jus starting this shit, I’m looking for my prime/
Against fucker like your I’ll take this one step at a time/
Your mother in bed, Dawg I wouldn’t pay a dime/
6th line first verse Aint no stoppin’ this rhyme/
Il break you down with my spittin’ expertise/
Your face? Dawg I should call it a disease/
If you was a actor, you’ll remind me of Macaulay Culkin/
If you was a my mother, I’d be a weed from your milking’/
I’m a docter when it comes to these spittin’ laws, Il tell you… You need a direction
Kid go home and clean your Draws/
Your teqniuqe is hilarious and your rhymes don’t have a catch/
Fucking Pussy, Get any nearer and il strike you like a match/

Good Look Dawg

biglou323 07-03-03 07:47 PM

lol Fuck Us Newbies Ey, Rookies at even posting a battle............................................ .........................

biglou323 07-03-03 07:48 PM

Come on Dawg, Bedtime soon .................................................. .................................................. :D

biglou323 07-03-03 08:19 PM

Dawg ive been waiting over 25 mins, Come On! Hit me with a comeback.................................

Fierce Shadow 07-03-03 08:27 PM

You betta try and refrain from any strugglin games cause I'm inside ya head and got a gun pointed towards ya brain//

You can't handle these rhymes of mine, I'm just to fly, I can obviously tell this dudes a white guy, one who watches the brady bunch to pass the time//

My arsenal includes raps and rhymes, guns and knives, but I've already broke your spine with these hands of mine//

Your rap was entertaining but not painful, those punches of yours were horribly strainful on my ears, now its time for mine to make you shed tears//

Big lou what a fucken fat hoe I'm killin you with a hoho, while I bounce you like a yoyo//

Your strcitly new to this thang, your gonna bring it to shame, Heh I just saw you fucken suck your mothers wang//

You should start practicin on them freestyles before you come up acting like eminem from 8 mile//

Sorry bout the delay had to go afk for a sec

biglou323 07-03-03 08:48 PM

Thats cool, Uppin' For Votes !................................................. .....................

biglou323 07-03-03 09:02 PM

Uppin............................................. .................................................. ..

biglou323 07-03-03 09:11 PM

Uppin............................................. ..................................................

Mass 07-03-03 09:17 PM

yo bitch battle mass if you know what good fa ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Manic Killer 07-03-03 09:18 PM

vote:shadow, better rime scheme..........
better punches and a nice flow took it for him.............

Fierce Shadow 07-03-03 09:48 PM

Uppin for votes yo
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Fierce Shadow 07-03-03 10:17 PM

uppin
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Autistic 07-03-03 10:20 PM

my vote goes ta Shadow cuz he came harder wit punches and had better flow.
my vote: Shadow
~1~
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BiG ApE 07-03-03 10:36 PM

my boy feirce took this one on everything. lou, u gotta work on some things............................................ ...................................


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