Rippin' Fakers
 

lateral passes like I'm comin' straight from QB,
nah, T-O... we know how tha clean flow is supposed ta sound
most you clowns just boast out your bullshit mouths
yeah(lol).. you tote full clips now..
big man, still wearin' diapers with dynamite so ya shit'll explode
fuck a cypher this a scripture, written in stone
biblical nature only livin' in danger, facin tha chrome
platinum an' silver chains, fo-real yo-brave, to mis-behave
escape the chain-a command, debate my demands like you safe from a man..
as fucked up as me.. discuss what with me, "security!" seriously
you delerious, curiousity killed the cat, an' you wanderin' up the wrong path.. Pussy!
feel my wrath; tha heat-a my tracks, I can't get on wax, shit just melts
it's like I spit from hell, a quick 6 rounds, times a-hundred-eleven
I'm tha devil himself, no-matter what I'm under-ya level
cut you up lyrically like a custom bevel, functions severed
trust dismantled like demolition, plus I'm better mahn just listen..

photonic lyrics pierce ya mind
leave you with pieces of mind
weaker than mine,
your meager supply of rhymes
is why you'll meet your demise

rational thoughts almost in-existant in your existance
in this instance I intend to proove your scripts impotence
the improtance of focus is for this force I po-sess
lyrics strung like magic... I guess it's hocus-pocus
just trickery, no scars, mental injury through bars
infinitly; too large, it's too hard
to barge into this game thick headed, ya shit's "rented"
I wish someone would cut you off at the "lease"
beyond me how you got even one track released,
schemin' on wax; bitch please! I'm a demon in rap
leavin y'all trapped like cellifane wrap twisted around ya carcus
you know you're garbage, still claimin' tha hardes
quit movin' tagets, duckin' mic punches, phyke..
fuckin' herb it's time for harvest...

fuck this.. I'm not respondin' to ne-ones shit again unless they reply to me first.. fuckin' ass holes..

^^lol, word^^

Even Though This Was Still A Dope Drop, I Wasn't Feeling It As Much As Other Shit You've Done! The Flow Was Capital Though, Vocab Was Good, But I've Seen You Do Better (Religious Athiest) For Example...

Still, It Had meaning, Got The Message Through!

Overall: 7.9/10

Shiznit's Thoughts:

VOCABULARY

>very well organized and written words...there were some words that were creatively used and placed perfectly within the lines


FLOW

> it wasnt that bad but its just when i read it....i got lost at some parts but i got it then go from there...its pretty interesting how u structured some words to fit in the flow exactly every line


WORDPLAY

> good multis ...there aint really nothing much on it but u made it at some point that u played the words and mix them well..props


CONTENT

>very typical but on how the way u made the reader interested to read on ur piece by using some really deep thoughts on some lines....it was really nice


OVERALL

>not that all bad but i read far more good than this from ur previous drops...but i liked it

drop more!

thanx babe... lol... I look 4ward to your comments, in-depth to a next level.. .