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Savory 07-04-03 07:44 PM

I'll Look At You
 
I'll look at you and tell you what I see
Something that's carmel complected
Sweet like chocalate
I see you and I'm ready to melt
Because you look that good
Tall like a tree
With fire red rows
Eyes that are heavy like weights
And a smile that brightens a day

Content 07-04-03 09:05 PM

Short But To The POint...Feels Like I Being Spoken To Forreal
Neve..Non The Less This Was Okay

BabyGurl68 07-05-03 01:41 AM

haha nice poetry girl, short n sweet n cute

varentao 07-05-03 05:54 AM

Heh.

Yeah, this was short, kind of to the point, and cute. I hate to use the word 'cute', but tis true, tis true...(!)..

...maybe could've been compressed a bit better. You know, for so few words and lines. But then again, it seems heartfelt. So it doesn't matter..

..resp...


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