Castle00 vs Violent~Words
 

This is a topical battle....
Votes should be based on structure and flow... And how realistic and your personal view on our verses....

The Rules are:
20-30 Lines
No hate/DR/Krew Votes
Spit when ever man ill start keyin now... dun matter who go first or when ya drop... lets get sum vots in by tonight though.....

Purple Haze chose tha subject.. and it is....

Best Friend has jus' died....

Hmm this should be interestin' good luck dawg....

Peace

LoL...I Dont Even..Know Where To Start.r What to do....So..Blah.at This..bbut i'lll Try.still though...

Heres My Check..In Just Seen that You Set It..Up...

ok look you got it all wrong,look lettme give yo uan example of one of my topicals and ull get ur ideas from their because you both obviously got it mixed up

EXAMPLE!!

Topic:Love

Ive been lonely for the feeling thats been empty in my heart
Ive been living a normal life but inside im missing one part
Ive been waiting for passion and for someone to care
Someone to hold and someone to bare
Ive been gaining anxiety for someone to be by my side
Someone to heal my wounds and make me feel happy inside
Ive been thriving for this one thing which i am yet to get
I finally found her and everything changed after we met
She had ravishing eyes and she was as lovable as a dog
I was holding her hands when we decided to jog
I started to feel something i never felt in the past
It was a feeling very special one that i would always fore-cast
I wondered what this feeling was and the ways it made me feel
How it made my heart turn lively and made all my problems conceal
It was like a soothing feeling like wen you pet a dove
Then i realised wat it was and it was the feeling of Love

~Purple Haze

lol
Castle that pac pic is hard dawg
if you made that, you got some skill
but yo i need 1 vote and my battle with a heavyweight is closed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63410

Castle you think you could hook me up with that pic or maybe a tight sig
cuz dawg ya shit is hard
damn

ya feel me

^^^Hhaha nuh man wish i ahd that much skill....
No free spostin thnx kats till we drop our shit.....
Ok purp... thnx for that i'll try my best...
Its sort of like a story huh???
Well thats what im doin but it rhymes n shit yea....
lol here it goes

I'll PM you Killa jus' elt me key this shit up....
Pce
i do try do some sigz but im still learnin not as good as tha otha kats on this site but yea.... and i do sketches too)

~Best Friends~
Intro [/BB]

We was 'Best Friends' until an 'Fatal-Accidents' ..'Best Friends' in in a Black and 'White-Residents'...Till the 'Persistence'..When his 'Existence' when 'Distinct' no 'Sentence' then my Mind when in the 'Distance'...I had to Kill everyone 'Instant'/

[B]:::Next Day:::

My Mind-was-Bent..no Further Thoughts but where my Friend-had-Went...
I was to End-It...But my Last Wordz was Harsh..i wasnt what i Ment-to-Sent...
He was Innocent..my Memory was Missing..but Instead i Took-his-Sense...
He was Killed when his Book-was-Dense...By me? at that Moment my Anger-was-Intense...
I had Strangle-him-in-Defense...and Hanged-him-in-r-Residence...
I wasnt Hesitant...He was My Friend..and Where i Go..he Always-went
Damn..my Freind Died..by My Hands..but No Evidence We was Tru Friends so why Did Have to Go-to-This?...
I-was-Pissed..i Snaked my On Friend..Wheres-the-Sense?
It was Cowardly..nothing I Could do..cause what was Found was Violent-acts-in-This.../

:::News Report:::

It was on The-News..that a Boy had Died-Yesterday..shit..My Freind? Died-Yesterday?
By Who Me? Damn-thats-Gay


"News Reporter" the Victim was Strangled..and Killed..and Hanged...As we All Know..he had Gang-Banged...so It could of Been any Body in his Gang...

?...It wasnt..Supposed-to-Be...it was Nothing-new-to-Me...We was Best Friends..and True-as-we-can-Be...

I Was Heart Broken..When-it-came-on-T.V..So I Went to His Funeral..and Told-everybody-it-was-Me...




~~LoL Dont Do Topicals..as you can See.~~ but this is an Start...

I've had madd homeboyz die on me so I woulda had this shit on lock I think...I'ma be back after Castle spits to check this...

You were tha one person that always stood by my side//
You were tha one person that was always down to ride//
They say the best things are free, dawg thats fo real//
Cause nobody ever made me feel tha same way you made me feel//
I'm always prayin' one day that the god will bring you back here//
I told you to always stand up for yourself, to have no fear//
Now i regret that cause i feel like its my fault your gone//
We were like bruthas, we must have been split when we were first born//
You don't know what you got till its gone, and now im totally lost//
Jus' to see you again dawg, hear your voice, i pay any cost//
Nobody could take ya place, many people have tried//
Why'd god have to take ya, why'd you haf to leave me side//
I remember how you would always be so excited//
Look on ya face, when ya got a blunt, n ya bout to light-it//
Lookin' back and those times seem so distant, i crack a smile//
Makes me feel like your by my side, but only for a while//
So confident in everything you did, a huge inspiration//
I know you up in heaven, watchin ova me n waitin//
The day i saw you red, in the middle of tha street, death near//
I tried to save you but you whispered in my ear//
" You'll always be my brother, i'll never leave your side"//
Its still hard goin' on, still sittin here, contonplatin suicide//
But i'm prayin' n hopin' that one day in heaven, you will descend//
I'll never for get tha day I Lost My Best Friend//

..... Hmmm lets get some opinions

^^Blah ..Dawg..you Knew..what You was..doing..also Didnt you..lol...Blah..thats mad Gay...-Peace..


~ONE~ Upped..

lets get some votes in pplz... we both know they sucked but tell us which 1 was better......
Stay Up.....
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yo fa sho castle's was betta.....
his had some goof eelin into it i liked it heapz......

it was touching ( lol)

peace.....
hit my battle up wid thugzdocry..honestly...no d/r.....

Castle took this....
Better concept and content
some ok imagery aswell......

Vote=Castle

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