freestyle no. 2 (diss)
 

yo this is every motherfucker that talked shit on my other work...yo *beat sets in slowly* yo *beat stops for 1 sec*
*beat sets in again, harder and faster*
yo what the FUCK, get your hands off your COCK//
all this shit needs to STOP, I ain't in a SHOK//
but y'all need to be, y'all stupid ass FUCKS//
don't be fooled by the GLOCKS, I have better guns to COCK//
but I don't need no guns, Imma beat you face to face!!!

chorus: d-12's "you can suck my dick if you don't like my shit. etc..." x2

niggaz hate my songs, but I don't give a DAMN//
you can suck MY dick..., than EMINEM//
bitch I kill niggaz like the KU-KLUX-KLAN//
imma cut ya heads off and put it in a CAN//
ya'll try to cool, but I allready AM//
*M.A.W. talks like a bitch*maw you need a betta flow,MAN//
that's M-A-double u to you...MA'AM

(chorus) x2

hahaha u hearded that...get your ass to will smith bitches, start a group wit that faggot-ass, you belong there...haha
M.A.W. ... tha thugs pound...
niggaz 4 life...

*beat stops*

yo................this was not good.......................your rhymin was kind fucked up and usin shit liek Ku Klux Klan could get your ass banned. Thats fuckin disrespect especially if you're black you would never mention that name. And you neverr said what the beat was............ thats my opinion. No beef

4/10

and check my shit out with Zainy "Letter for the Close Deceased"

well I'm glad you're honest...............
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by the way, that KKK shit was ment verbally.
I'm not really gonna kill niggers and you know it cuz' I allso said niggaz for life!!!
peace y'all

^^lol, word^^

I've Used KKK Before, Lyrically It means, Gonna Murder Your Verse Or Whatever..

Anyway, This Was A Pretty Wack Piece, Don't Have The Rhyming Words In Bold, Just no. Try To use more Complex Vocab, Cos That Was Basic Stuff, Your Trying To use Multi's Which Is Good, It Helps The Flow!

Keep Spttin, As For This Piece 4/10, Could've been Waaay better...Heres A Good Example Of Vocab:

Satirical Empirical Lyrical Lyrics, Radical Fundamental Words Of Cyrix...
Sentimental Gentle Antics, Got My Instrumental Mental Mind In Frantics...” - lol, Look At our 110%Raw remix, Sands Shit, Any other Vets Shit, You'll Get A Good Idea Of Vocab And Wordplay!

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Um... I really dont know what to say to this. But it was aight though. Elevate a lil more.

dont worry....youl be dope in about 7 months.....if you keep at it..!!