[6] Madman vs [11] Pledgeofpanther
 

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Topic On Lsd...

What a terrible topic....I fucking hate you Sand....Go to HELL...lol...IN!

lol no way this is beyond a joke lol i thought people put that topic in as a joke....this is sick...lol oh well good luck MM...looks like am out on the first round lol.....IN

aight this shows you how much of a bad topic this is...cuae it ook eme ages to get to the point *shakes head* i hate you sand...

peer pressure always goes the wrong way in my opinion
nothing will ever work out for the better, beleive me
a kno.heres ma story

walking home from school mindin ma own business
a guy walks up to offers me some wierd shit
says a can test it out and if a like it buy some more
a look down at what hed put in ma hand.never seen the likes of it befo
but a got the jist of it and stuck it in ma pocket
what harm coud it do if i just took it once ta try it
all the way home thoughts ran thru ma mind
dont take it you idiot.. its worth alteast one little try
So a got home and kissed ma mom on tha cheek
went up to ma room sat on the bed..thank fuck its the end of the week
a waited untill she went to her bed before takin out the drugs
a sat there crossed legged lookin down at the load
wondring how ta take it..i was totally confused
doyou inhale it or eat it..well i had nothing to lose
so a stuck it in ma mouth and jsut lay on ma back
closed ma eyes real tight while it dissolved.tried to relax
soon a was asleep dreamin dreams i could think up
and then suddenly i was shakin uncontrollably...couldnt stop
a suddley woke up.and i was covered in bugs
a screamd realy loudly and tried to push them all off
but they dug in tighter and i was petrified
and that voice ran thru ma head again..it ws worth one little try
a started cursin at the voice told it to shut the fuck up
when ma mom walked in tha door and jsut stood ther dumbstruck
when a sen her a just froze didnt kno what to do
but for some strange reason she knew what id been up to
she started shoutin at me too and the pain was deafnin
but a still could come back down to earth a had o strength left in
she was wavin her hands frantically above ma face
bu she was movin so slowly a had to adjust to the pace
ma head was spinnin really fast and i felt real sick and in pain
ma moms screams and cryin was gettin hard to translate and take in
somehow a managed to tell her to get out of ma room
and she left jsut like that and left me alone
a sat on the end of ma bed wit ma head in ma palms
sweatin uncontrollably trying to figure out a plan
i couldnt get to sleep of those bugs would come back
and i couldnt get up in walk..case i would just fall flat
so a sat there for a while untill a finally fell asleep
and a felt maself fallin down summat which was really deep
when a finally hit the bottom a felt piercingly hot
but it was just me.i felt the temperature around me begin to drop
i heard screams of ma family they sounded in pain
then right enough i was awake in my room once again
but this time there were no bugs or no family
but it was big orange flames that surronded ma body
a paniked so badly and started runnin in circles crying
shoutin on ma family but they coundt hear me.no use tryin
untill a noticed ma windo and i knew it was ma only chance
i pushed open the window and sat there watchin the fire dance
hypnotised by its moves when suddley it stopped
finally i realised i was just hallucinatin..when a lost ma balance and dropped
for the first time in ma life when i was afraid i didnt speak
even though i knew this was the end...quite frankly i was too weak
instead i was mesmirised by the little shining lights of the town
as i pretneded i was flying high, not hitting my come down

Blah, I'm not feeling this, but I'm bored, so I'm gonna key this up right about now?

Lookin in the mirror at myself, with my comb in my hand
My hair can't do shit, I leave it, it looks bland
Get my shirt on, take one more look into the mirror at my hair
"Here comes Mad Man out the door. Ladies better beware!"
Tell my Mom I'll be back late, get the keys to my 4Runner
Pulling out that driveway that night, was easily my biggest blunder
The trip I made was uneventful, except for an 80 year old flipping me off
Arrived at Liam's house not long after, so nervous, my face turned hot
Walked in the door got on my groove, and had a real great night
Knocking back drinks, made me better, and then I had no fright
Then in an act of boldness, went up to the finest biatch in the joint
Spit some game, made some jokes, it seemed everything was right on point
She wasn't up for the one night shit, so I got her number, and I was content.
Sobered up not to long after, grabbed my keys, and away I went.
Checked my mirrors twice started up my car, making sure I saw no C.H.P.
Then like a bat out of hell it came, My car flipped two times, or maybe three
Felt a snap in my neck, and the rest of my body went numb
Fell unconcious after that, but I wasn't dumb, I could see the sum
My neck had snapped, I was paralysed, and I awoke to see a green wall
Tryed to move my mouth, no response, nothing happened at all
I was a vegetable with no feelings up or down my body.
A machine now breathing for me, I prayed to my dear Goddy.
My Mom walked in, and cryed over me, and then said "Pull the plug quickly..."
They took me off my life support device, also known as my LSD...






Bet you didn't see that coming.

ok ill kick the weeks voting off...

Pledgeofpanther- Went more the direction I was expecting 4 this...not saying its bad im saying its no all that creative...still nicely wrote...

Mad Man- Yet Another sick drop from Mad Man...and he went way off road with this and that how you win battle...LSD=Life Support Device, thats genius...at least i think thats what u meant in this verse...

vote= mad man

I Liked Pledges, But MadMans Was Just So Crazy That It Worked..
The Lsd shit was Crazy.. pledge... your verse was awesome. but i love it when people flip the topics..

Vote Mad Matt Maxson (Mad Man)

Pledges was good i really enjoyed reading it and he concpt was good,
But Fuck me sideways........Mad that was shit-hot the concept was genius and you pulled it off, Flipity flip.....

Vote = Mad

Pledge - Nicely Written And Good To Read...More Direct Aproach To The Topic And Did A Nice Job Of It...

Mad Man - Very Nice...Well Written And The Way Ya Flipped The LSD Topic Was Dope...Maybe Even Genius As Others Have Said...Very Nice...

Vote - Mad Man

lol like a didnt see this coming.mad man awsome flip.sersiouly i was open mouthed at how you done it.well half that and tht it was better than mine lol.maybe a title in sight.nah dont think so .not after being put wi you first try :( no fair.are there any second chances lol

pledge- nice and well writen, kinda predictable.. but very good

MAD MAN- you owned it... loved the twist, i loved the story line

VOTE=MADMAN

ok my vote goes to mad man... because he chose the unwritten path..... i would have never thought of that

pledge your was good too but it was exactly what i was expecting for the topic.... usually the real good topicals are the ones who dont choose the beaen path

good from both

vote = mad man

gotta go with madman really
had a better verse and flipped it well
pop....yours was too basic but stayed on point though
need to inject a bit of originality and some more creativity but ur improving

Definitely Madman on this. Pop's was a little repetitive without making strides. Although I did enjoy the closing. Mad's was just short and sweet. Nothing drastically dynamic in the writing, but merely using that theme for this topic wins it.