murderous
 

sometimes i spit my rhymez sometimes i spit my gat/ sometimes i spit slugs that manipulate and twist out backs/ my moneys bigger than compost heaps/ if its lookin a little smalla im puttin holes in ya jeep/ fuck wit me/ its da sea where u creep/ cuz i schedule my victims and its dat time of da week/ lets role play u b me and i b u/
u in hawaii and im in i c u/ im a vaccine u da flu/ im hitler and u da jew/ i know my style's intimidati'n/ ya favorite rapper comes on afta me and u change da station/ niggaz step up like my gun dont blast/ think its funny? try me ya fun wont last/ i'll have u turned from flesh 2 ash/ present 2 past/ have ya layin on ya ass
fertilizin' da grass/ BITCH! IM MURDEROUS!!!!!!!!!

yo on some thugg shit this was on point with a bullet not to many cats use this style anymore on open mic but you peaced it well togeather.
peep my peace called battlen myself

The Way You Structure This Was Wack, You Need More Complex Vocab, Better Flow!

Try To Add Some Multi's In There Too, Overall: Needs Alot Of Work But keep Elevatin! 4/10