Captivity (4 mah queen)
 

Captivity

Chorus

A love i'm not used-to..
Never cheated nor used-you.. cant lose you..
Fits a thrid in my trinity, amazed at how you can be so into me..
Captivates in me in lost Captivity..

Verse

Struck me on a day less than boring//
One morning.. ran into me.. naht seen, i didn't catch the fore-warning//
Gave me a number to call, left it on my palm//
Sweat pourin, washin away tha number.. must remain calm//
Depressions past out-last.. tunes in my compiled into a lovers' song//
I surrender into sweet splender.. that glorious day in december//
A fire in our hearts..enchanted in embers.. Only we can share the contact we seen, but no one else remembers//
Weeks after weeks, a week after the month.. touch too much..movies, to homes//
1 month i put a diamond on your finger, flossed your neck in stones//
Await your sweet grace.. Lip gloss on your lips, make-up powdered on your face//
Shirt off your waist, thongs' in linen lace.. soon to erase the standard pace.. smiles flourished, despite tryin to keep our expressions straight//

Without chu i'd be lost.. un perpetual thoughts//
Keep you close to my heart, never to lose you.. love secure but still keepin my fingers crossed//
If you were gone I'd cry oceans//
Watch everything pass slowly and live life in slow motions//
Theres suttin rare-in-you that only I can see when i stare-at-you//
You impare-my-view.. I love you forever.. remember.. I'm always there-for you//

chorus

A love i'm not used-to..
Never cheated nor used-you.. cant lose you..
Fits a thrid in my trinity, amazed at how you can be so into me..
Captivates in me in lost Captivity..

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damn dawg... neva thought some1 who would come so hard...
would have a song like this n do that well
that was tight man
i was feelin it
nice work

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tight shit as useal from u, felt every bar

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