New Shit... Peep this and tell me whachu think
 

Aiyyo check this out nigga...

Ima make this shit quik so get off my dick
And quit startin bullshit and tha gun wont click//
Rap Battles? Nah nigga I rip niggaz for fun
I make them leave cryin to let u know that Im done//
Elevatin? Yea nigga Ima keep that in mind
But none of these mahfuckas are "Hard 2 Find"//
ppl say I got a style like "D.R.E." but I
stay tryin'a get wit "B.R.E."//
Vocab? Nah nigga I havent updated It always
stay underrated or overhated//
Complexity? I dunno what dat is but u
can swallow dat shit like its my jizz//
Every girl I know say Ima be da next "50" Im
not a snitch though but I'll write sumthin nifty//
My ratings? Now thats unknown for now until
Im on tv and rippin up "Lil Bow Wow"//
My flows stay wit a fundamental play but
everyday is just an "Elemental" day//
I write gangsta like cause thats my life
And tha next woman I take will be my wife//
Clubs? Yea nigga I hit da hot spots
Like "DJ Coop" mixin wit latina hots//
"DJ Toosheezy" gets all da breezies
This is sum tight shit for all my neezies//
U catch a quik one and end up wit a bruise
Top story "11 News" wit "Della Crews"//
I dont need "Anger Management" for my anger needs
I need a blonde and a false foot like "Mr. Deeds"//
U niggaz need to back up or meet tha shotty
I'll have u all spread out like shit in a potty//
I base my life on a "Ghetto Story" but treat
U niggaz like "Nothin" like im dat nigga "N.O.R.E."//
My "Pride and Glory" is tha only way for
me to succeed and get to tha place I wanna stay//
And thats in tha rap game wit all this fame and
not be put to shame and look like a lame//
I can give u a buzz like a sour "Shock Tart"
then die so u can "Kickstart My Heart"//
New Vocab, More Elevatin, and Complexity
Now Ima make like "Tom Vercetti" and go to "Vice City"

End It....

datz da best shit ive heard outta u eva
it all fitz n flowz
n it all workz
good shit
keep it up

<Gangsta One stares in amazment> Whoa........................that was the dopest shi' I have ever seen!!!!!!!!

shut the fuck up gangsta one, you cock suckin bell end, come and finish of our battle you fuck

No freepostin man... Uppin for feedback

wasent feelin this at all, so babdly stands out u tryin ta be somin ya aint

Actually Im not tryna be nothin. Its just a flow. Just cause u wanna stand out wit ur shit dont mean everybody else has to. But if ur shit so good, how come u aint on tv or nothin? Or u dont have an answer... If not, then shut up and run along and have fun battlin and postin. Uppin for feedback still.

g u cant take critique, dont fuckin post iight, their was no feelin on dis piece, no wordplay, muiltis,metas or anythin else. period

i dont agree with any of them
i think you iight ...sound kindalikajuggalo
but its iight that shyt you spit keep spittin nigga

Yea Ima keep dat up and Zainy, i was just postin sum factual questions thats all. I can take it. If i couldnt I wouldve been gone from this site. Think about it.

man i just left BRE lmao, u get in easy

It doesnt matter about gettin in easy. And whats that suppose to mean anyway? And Quit freepostin. Uppin.....

iight 1 more cus u asked a q, BRE will let ya in easy, they got some of da best emcee's but aint a real crew.

O ok. Well aight. Uppin.

Expand on the lines n stuff so u can fit everythin u wanna say in.
Also try to leave the films, games other artists, tv programmes out, its ok usin like 1 a peice but if u throw so many in it looks like a bit immature reflection on u, which is cool if thats what ur style is or whatever.
Oh, and flow was a bit choppy at times but mines shit too but you can always work on it man keep posting one day u'll hit the high note.