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dw vs jshook
newb ere but says hes got a record of 9-0 on another site!
15 lines max no crew/d ridin/hatin votes no feedin u spit first! |
we goin first to 5 an 3-0 is KO?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I 'l post when i get time in a bite~ |
Alrite listen up,
Jshook! Nigga u bout 2 be shook up by my determination, your ass a callaboration which causin enormous confrontation// Rencarnation the only hope 4u wen this battle reaches its last post, I’ll knock u from coast 2 coast n u’d still be thick enough 2 boast// U 0-0 n u think u can beat me, dawg go n battle a newb if u wanna a free-be// Cos all u getting ere is “sharp” lines cutting up your exisistance, the difference between me n u is I need no assistance--// --puttin words together, you’ve never ad 2 weather through a storm like this, with every punch u miss, while I neva miss a diss// jshook don’t look now but u beta duck, cos these punches “comin” faster than wen I make ya bitch suck// from now on cat neva walk alone, cos nxt time u in the zone im gonna put more holes in ya head than a “micraphone”// beta “wish upon a star” or at ya nxt birthday, cos wen im finished ere ya only memory of life will be your own “birth-day”// once again typically rulin a battle lyrically, u wanna battle physically? Seriously Giv me the place n I’ll beat your ass directly// im a “vet in practice” n u my patient, but u a cat wivout “9 lives” cos that myth is ancient// we goin one on one nigga, head 2 head, u just read this verse n ya heart stopped dead// mislead? Always u neva on track, n you’ll neva be on a track, except 4 a train one wen ya bones will go crack, crack sorry nigga I just broke your back// now im bout 2 finish this, but im goin on a high like I’ve just smoked a “joint”, it was a joint dissision 2 battle but I think u got my point! Alrite uppin this y’all!!! now u dawg, thought i'd spit first ad nothin 2 do!!! |
**no beef afta , its all in the battle playa**
~~J Shook’s drop~~ Now I’m verse’n this cocky lil bitch named “dw”/ my rap records bout to change to 10-0 cuz of you/ u ain’t a rapper, u prolly a cheerleader like George W*/ I’ma destroy you/ make people be like “dw” WHO//*( George W. Bush was a cheerleader) Feelin the heat from my rhymes drenches you in perspiration/ U gasp’n for air now that da game is at a higher elevation/ no crew participation / sry your lines aren’t hitten at the right location/ but hold up I’ma Knock You Out, ya betta get some medication// Make ya sweat, you develop the “Chills” an a “Feva”/ your dick so small ya have ta jack off wit a tweezer/ I’m gonna leave wit a win, so Bitch c-ya/ I guess you just decided to spit first I aint need no breather// You survivan this lyrical fury an onslaught, theirs no way/ I’ma assassinate, an manipulate, you in every way/ the way I’ma kill you they gonna make this shit a National Holiday// I can’t stand your rhymes, they makes me gag like “two men kissing”, with you I don’t know were to start dissing, your flows on “Milk Cartons” it’s Missing// Spitten in a fearless rage, watchin your lyrics diteriate/ playin games wit your mind, while I control your fate/ people can stipulate/ but I’ll always hold the power to manipulate/ then I cripple you just to complicate// Releasin mad crazy punch lines, make you oblivious/ rapid fire from the “Gak” keeps spitten continuous/ please stop rappin you suck I’m serious/ ya betta step down or I’ll blaze you I’m furious/ you bout to lose bitch, so how you liken this?// Engulfed in flames mutha fucka, burnt in the 5th degree/ knock ya off your feet like *Heniesy*/ I just want the MC’s/ an viewers to see/ that they should VOTE 4 ME/ not this pussy// |
~uppin for votes~............................................ ...........
***hit this up*** |
flo-shook
word play-shook multi-shook mechanics-both enjoyment-shook final verdict-shook....very nice shit.... return the favor wit an honest vote here..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63797 |
thanks space ~~ hit the pole.................................~
.................................................. ..............................~ Uppin for VOTES |
UPPIN for votes.............Space.....hit the pole .................................................. ...............aight UPPIN
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yeh nice verse there but 10-15 lines i think u smashed that abit! never mind though,
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yea each paragraph sequence =a bar. .cuz i'm rhymeing the same sound through the paragraph..
sry for the miss understandin |
vote people............................................ ........make shore you hitthe poles.........................
thanks~ J Shook |
whoa, oh yeah he has a 9-0 record. very tight verse with nice wordplay and flow. dw was also tight but unfortunetly hes versing the real thing. nice work jshook.
vote- jshook return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64197 |
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thanks for the vote...... im really up 2-0 but 1-0 cuz the first cat did't hit the pole.............................................. ................
..............Uppin for votes |
J-shook'd it, nigga made him look
dw is a slave to apage inhis rhyme book J-shook too this one no doubt, better punches son |
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