VeTeRaN Mc vs Goosen
 

u spit first
10-15 lines
no dr/crew votes
i wont feed

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ur spitting first, u challenged me, good luck
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da beat drops.quick like dis cat remindin himself hes still a bitch


I’m declining all your health; you’re coming up killed//
You remind me of myself when I wasn’t this ILL//
I’ll sputter and spill vocabulary all over the floor//
If you aint know that I’m raw, motherfucker get-real//
Get touched with the-steal, bigger holes in your pores//
u think u the shit-kid thats wut-im-stressin//
but u'll get ya wig-split when i bust-my-wesson..dead-cold//
head-slugs to net-thugs until they necks-fold//
Goosen you ain't no pensman, I'm a fucking savage//
the diifference is u cant phaze me.. a sav an mediocore//
Your chances of beatin me are like a FAG in a game of 'straight' poker//
Kid don’t try to front, I’m the reason you fell//
I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing//
the only chance for dis dudes votes…is if they die typing//
bullet’s hollow like ya block is... I soak carpets and smash//
I’ve shook more Vet’s tryin to hand me a loss than Parkinson’s has//

aight, well u wrote more than 15 lines but anyway, here we go

Your in need of a 'pound', like that biter 50 'pence'//
I guess if i'm seeing you now, then i've got the 'sixth sense'// (i see dead people)
Your Makavelli slash Underated but i know you won't admit//
But you are in Merkin Collarbrations, so either way your shit//
So how did you get back on this site?, it must have been a glitch//
Doesnt matter if you change your name, we all know your a bitch//
Your starting to cheat, because you can't take the fighting//
You've got one 'bin' for biting, and another for 'recycling'//
Me and The Execs, got your crew by their 'collars'// (merking collarbrations)
"Go to jail, do not pass go, do not collect 200 dollars"//
You didn't get close to me, and don't try it again//
I'm explosive, read the label, "keep out of reach of children"//
Veteran? You got no recognition, only word you've heard is 'ban'//
You haven't accomplished shit, i guess you've got a "5 year plan"//

aight, lets get some votes, drop a link and ill return the favour

I dunno wats goin on in here but VET if u are who u say u are what the fuck is up wit ya verse

take ya pick from BITING OR RECYCLING

that verse is fucked man, uve ripped that shit either from a past battle or from yaself, wats up man, i had repsect fo u n ur skill but shit dawg dats fucked wat u did

n be fo u claim that i fulla shit, heres the link to the battle where u ripped summa da shit

"Underated - Overhated VS KerrDezzy"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62386

goosen slayed him ere, vet not bad 4 a newb, although it does sound like u r from goosens verse, anyway beta wordplay n flow from goosen there, both ad gud punches tho!
vote=goosen

vet was good for a newbee but although i dont like him goosen got it coz he had better flow

vote=goosen

Like he said ....goosen had better overall in my opinion
Vote=Goosen

Goosen takes it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whass up check out my battle against deceased!!!!

I vote goosen

Uh! Uh! 4real fuck around and get killed!!!!

yo Black Jack I see what u mean, I read the link u gave
he recycled the whole verse
but even with that recycled verse, goosen still won
better punches and personals
vote=goosen