dedicated to u!........
 

i sent dis to a couple of ma mates but adding a personal verse to each of dem dis is tha main of it.......


In ma words I express tha way im feeling,
but in words I cant explain how im dealing/
I get annoyed coz ma prospect is unexpected,
I toyed wit normal life, n it iv rejected/
Will ma ability wit words be detected,
or I jus another fanta-sist getting objected?/
Ppl say U can do it, tha skies tha boundary,
Ex-cept ma weather conditions are cloudy /
dis pressure got me trip trip tripping,
n I seize it but it keeps slip slip slipping/
how can I get hold of it if I don’t see it?,
How can i touch it if i don’t feel it?/
I was at the stage wen I needed tha questions fo I,
I know dem n now all I feed on is a Reply/
I would ask tha man above, but is he true?,
Don’t think im leaving, as much as I would like to/
not dat im thinking bout ma own suicide,
im happi I get to see u n u make me smile,/
So u wondering wot all dis gotta do wit u?,
I wan u to view wot im goin thru n ur sum1 I dun wanna lose
Iv noticed i pick out things u do n take tha piss,
but im jus valuing bits I dunt wanna miss/
and ‘if’ droplets of fear would fall from ur eyes,
I wouldn’t jus watch, wit u id cry/
Even though I don’t show it regularly,
our friendship means a lot to me/

ill stay till tha very end if u let me coz I im ur friend!

nd ‘if’ droplets of fear would fall from ur eyes,
I wouldn’t jus watch, wit u id cry/

i like those lines..hmm....this poem first made me think u were happy..then maybe sad..i dont know..got confused....but nice piece..God bless.1...

yeh i am confused its jus how thangs go. thangs fo tha reply much lve!
peace ~roX~

It might just be the mood i'm in right now. But this piece totally caught me. It dragged me along right to the end.

I feel the agony, the questions, not knowing whether you're walking down the right path...or even not walking down one at all. At a crossroads....just you getting your current mind set at present onto paper...prodding away at the truth...something along those lines...

..no critique..unless you want some. But i didn't feel lioke giving any on this piece...

...resp...

im well chufft wit ur reply varentao! im glad i got ma point across, u got it rite. much love n resp fo ur time.
peace~roX~
:D