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HellRaizor 07-09-03 03:16 PM

this was written to my special someone feedback only
 
its you im thinking of in the beginning and end of the day
its you that understands each of my problems in many different ways
its you that i get into arguements with over trials and tribulations
its you that i know through the day for me has been waitin
its you that i cant really express words how i feel
its you that only i can think of has been with me in so many ordeals
its you that through this short time has helped me grow as person
its you that i know if im hurtin im automatically gettin your concern
its you that since you started talking to me your trips to the mall
have lessend
its you that i know im doing some right to have you as my blessing

she got me feelin all soft dont it get it twisted you will get merked in a battle, im just showin some versatility

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varentao 07-11-03 11:13 PM

^^^Indeed.

Well straight from the heart, simple and to the point of what you feel.

And i'm thinking that's what you wanted. To get it onto paper in a way that pleased you in a personal way.

..nothing more to say. Nice piece (oh!)...

..resp..


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