Crackills -v- Carsonjet
 

heres the rules
10 lines
no crew, hate, d/r votes
no feeding or recycling rhymes
48 hour rule
^not exactly a freestyle keystyle is it.......

yea it is i'm just sayin 48 i'll be done within the hour

iight i'm checkin in

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o aight..lol..chekin in then...ima do my shit now too then...
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yo chek it

yo if crack-kills then why is it your blood i spill?//
thinkin u can seal da deal,well, bitch.. ya gotta lot ta learn ya feel?//

on the extremist method ima 'tali'-my votes up to 5-0 an lyricaly 'ban'u//
like water-gate-lights-out....these files u see aint time enuff to pan-thru//

forget it-u kno im hot'dawg'-bitch crackill-u jus the relish//
no need for me to em-belish-my lines be hot'-they simply hellish//

like the rice crispee fellow-u crackill in da middle//
ya fruity like a skittle, taste the rain-bow-cus like a leprechaun u little//

rappin wit CJ-offa vacation-patience...he'll get better when his opponents do-//
till then he gonna rip on kats like u-u aint nada but his blackened resi-due- used to polish up his shoe's//

......next.......

Carsonjet u have potential but u don't know how to use-it/
When you spit it comes out soundin like western country mu-sic//
Trust me on this one carsonjet is wack-as-fuck/
This is a 50 cent wannabe but he can't amount to a half-a-buck//
Ma'fucka i'll break ur neck like i was busta rhymes/
Cause u can't rap, we seen better spits verbilizes from mimes//
And u dont even have to forfeit i win by a default/
And u don't have 2come out the closet u was sucking dick and got caught//

~the killa~

My eight nines n ten teks take lives, break spines n bend necks/
I spray five, get left dead, u expendable like 'fake dimes and wet checks'//

the killa was tight...nice drop.....
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let da votin begin.......................

iight nice verse carson

uppin 4 votes
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nah....CJ is a lil rusty.........
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id say that verse was rather loose......
good battle tho....nice to be bak in battlin

what CJ lil rusty
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wat do u mean

i dont kno
it was a really close battle
ya'll both had a tight verse
both had good punches
nice wordplay
i say this shit is a tie

Ya Heard
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64706

oh...my name..carsonjet..short ..CJ..
this is like my first battle in like a month
took a lil break...gotta get bak into the flo

same here dat shit was close as fuck

but i'm gonna go wit crackills on dis one dat killa was a killer

both yall was overall good but crack one by a foot

vote crackills

i stopped 4 like a week

but i'm of course still hot lol

yea this shit was close as fuck.....and again nice battle "CJ"

IIGHT UPPIN THIS SHIT 4 MORE VOTES

nice battle u 2. nice to see freestyles of 2 really good battlers.
wow... this hard. deff. a tie but... i will have to go w/ crackkills too. lol i liked his verse.

aight peeps good start...
lets not all the sudden sleep on dis shit....
uppin for more votes....feedbak is a plus...thank you