5harp5h00ter -vs- J $ BLAZE $
 

Rules

10lines max

no DR
no feeding
no crew votes
no bullshit
no vote swaying

aite fosho....checkin in..........`````````````````````````````````````` `````````````````````````````````````````````````` `

Here is some Quik Shit

This kid J Blaze with dolla signs in his name just wanna battle me to get some quick fame/
Fucking with the wrong Executive, you'll get merked so dont point the finger to blame, when this battle over, just quit the rap game/
Lyrical surgeon injecting sick bodily fluids, hoping after recovery you would spit your ill flows fluently/
Nothing could help your flowing ability, cause all your rhymes you spittin are fustily/(means ol-fashioned)
You thought you heard the ocean' flowin'[b] from these [b]shells by your ears/
Gonna have you on your knees with your face in fear, begging for me to stop the merking, while you leaking tears/
Look at your trembling face, a disgrace to the race, try to give you a facial, send punches at your face, how does my fist taste?/
This kid Blaze is not on my level, forget level, he's not in my galaxy, so get outta my space/
Blaze dont stand a chance, quit rap and join a marching band, cause he thinks he can bounce back like a rubber band
Check it out, you hear that appaluse for you from the fans, hold up, they clappin' at you but I dont see any hands/


NO FEEDING EH................

Dont take forever either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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today boi, its only 10lines, not a freaking essay
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
^^ hit this up witha poll vote and ill get this when im done

dawg i just wrote a verse to my other battle fuk..give me tne minutes.. mayne..dont bitch......aite verse tho...but u gunna be merked..
cuz i iant a newb..i use to be10-3 before i lost my fukin password na went to college..1

he ay go...VAgina....dis odda do the J O B/..................1

Sharp-revert to the past, over-rated now.. in rank, you-ass use to stand dead-last//
when cat's say 'fuck you' dis bitch is quick to spread-fast.. at-last the urge has-come//
as I would have it SHARP is the first-victim.. make shit talking and rhymes merdge as-one//
battlin? 'SHOOT' spits and they hit you like a gatlin-gun, my hits-don't stun//
aim-to-kill.. best to have dental insurance cus I have a permit to drill.. still bust clips-at-grills//
you lack in skills, my-rap-appeals to the folks of R B.. the hoax, i'm sick of this trick//
it soaks in game while your ridin-on-dick, my fame? there is none, but i'll still ride in this flick//
serious man, the bullshits got to stop.. if it don't i'm quick to pull-shit and watch ya body drop//
get 'murderd' in 'ink' like ya name was gotti, ya got-me.. big shot, your fake.. yes bitch a phony//
homie you can't bite my style, stop tryin to clone-me.. I slam like sammy with a corked-tree//
emcee? not sharp as you-can-see I understand this rap, death trap.. understand this strap ho?//
do as I say so.. you tryin to hang with me? when that voice in your head talks, just say-no//
And just to show i've beat you.. think far back, before you drop da votes.. realise, I'll eat-you!.. your ass-is-still-whack//

UPPIN to merk anotehr cat..........................////////////////////////
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uppin 11111111111111
UPPIN naw mean... drOP YA LINK

I read tha first 2 bars of each rap and came to tha conclusion
that J got chu son... your shit was a lil on tha basic side but
I was feelin J's shit more on pretty much every aspect..

Vote -j blaze

i was feelin j's flow ,punches, and wp more than i was shooter so ima have to give dis battle to j.......nice job both of ya

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i think j blaze got this one

better punches,word using,and flow

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j blaze got dis betta punches ay my bro hypnotic wants 2 kno would yall peep his battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64706

No offence but I dont think you followed the 10line rule,????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????