Split-eyez v.S J BLAZE$
 

10 LINES
DIS OUTTA BE QUICK AN SWIFT
AN VOTE IN MY OTERH BATTLE WIT APPREAL..
RULESI DONT GIVE A FUK
SPIT DAWGY DAWG

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aight spittin in 10 mins
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i’m doin this quick, wit beats and ill lyrics matchin to ma spirit/
i’m rippin ya heart out quickly, so anyone can hear it/

i’m gigantic... sufferin from constant hot flashes/
like a flame thrower i’m burnin ya to a crisp of ashes/

i’m beatin ya to the ground, while everyone is watchin ya crumble/
fuckin fag can’t even get his ‘soldier salutin’ when he sees J.Lo,.. now that’s a fuckin problem/

ya betta watch me nigga, in hell they consider me as the fuckin anthem/
while ur here on earth screamin to Jlo ...‘I just can’t cum’/

so you bumpin and grindin wit her... but it comes to a halt/
nigga didn’t ya momma tell ya that rapin is sexual assault?/

just accept the fact that ur gay, havin Elton John as your desire/
i bet that when he sees ya small dick he’ll come out straight... after he had ya nuts on fire/

Just face the fact... i’m ya worst nightmare, the illest enemy/
Everybody knows... that i’m what ur just pretendin to be/


... peace....

IS DAT IT...thats aite for ya first battle..but u receivein a loss.

Good luck? Bitch, don’t switch up your game//
Wished me luck cuz you were hoping I would wish you the same//
Cuz you know you’ll need it; all my scripts are great//
I don’t want you to get lucky and beat me, so I won’t reciprocate//
And luck strikes in strange ways; it’s due to happen//
Like in the form of my Gateway computer crashing//
And it’d turn on again Wednesday, mocking me right to my face//
Which is better than any diss you could ever write against BLaze//
I pack a pistol pen; you know my shit will win//
You should post with longer bars to fit more disses in//
I’m proving I am a menace; you’ll lose when I end this sentence//

yo dawg
you spittin?

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ohh yea it says..10 lines u did 14..next time follow the rules...im not trippin u lost anywayz..good battle tho.......
UPPIN i guess

nice spit

uppin fo votes

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I got J Blaze in this one...Split eyes had some great wordplay at the beginning, but it fell apart into basic rhymes toward the middle and end.

I voted J blaze cuz he had the dominant wordplay, better creativity N structure, and maintained his flow...

split eyes your hot nice shit cuz---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

dope battle yo i'll peep this later when i get to 100............................................... ..............................

aight thx fo the honest comments
still uppin
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this was a good battle............................................ .......................

both had good vocab

both word play

blaze got betta punches