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Fuck Ya 'Kids'....You Can Call Me The 'Sperm' Caper
I'll Leave Ya Ass 'Outlined' Just Like 'Term Papers'!!
Spittin Flows...Niggas Know I'm the Written Pro..
If You Runnin Ya Mouth..You'll Get 'Hung' Like Wet 'Clothes'
I Got Sets Of Hoes...Ready To Blow And Suck
Just Like 'Prostitutes' I'm Ready To 'Go And Fuck'!!
Let Me Slow The Truck..Cause Yall Bout To See Hell
Niggas Bout To Get They Head 'Spun' Like 'Sprewells'!!
I'm Done So Be Well..Nigga I'm Still Rollin
Ya Money Comin Up 'Short' Just Like 'G Coleman'!!
Like 'Construction Workers'.I Love To 'Carry Hammers'
Hit A Nigga Wit '20' Just Like 'Barry Sanders'
Lay Ya Ass Down...Now That's A Very Sad Fall
I'm Puttin '12' In Ya Back..Like 'Terry Bradshaw'
Don't Get Mad Dawg..I'll Leave Wit A Great Smile
Have You 'Shootin Yaself' Like 'Chedda' In '8 Mile'!!

Shiznit's THoughts:


ok wait. why the hell am i reading this again??

*scratches head*

alright..this doesnt make sense at all...

First off your words are defnitely not good...how the way u structured it doesnt support one another....its like a whole twisted cliched drop...i mean regardless of the ".." and !! and the '....' goin on....nothing really comes up in my head when i read that...

secondly...hmmm...the whole content really bugged me ..i mean some words didnt even coincide with one another...it kinda confusin and i dont really get what u want to say...u may think im stupid cuz i think stupid ppl doesnt understand this...and you used like tons of like 'Barry Sanders' ...like "G. Coleman'......bunch of ppl...

but hey...we still elevatin tho...if u put these words together and put them in a more constructive way of executing ur words and verses....you would be fine...