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Verse I Wrote...Disses Lots Of Celebrities
Yeah This Is My Verse From A Track I'm Making With Amp...We'll Post It Up When Amp's Verse Is Done But Heres Mine..
First The Meaning Behind It: Me And Amp Were Chillin One Day And I Said To Him "Ya Know Who Pisses Me Off..." And We Started Talking For Like An Hour About Who Pisses Us Off And Finally Amp Had The Genius Idea Of Making A Track About It...SO This Track Is Supposed To Diss People Each One Of Us Don't Like {Individually, Me And Him Are DIsagreed In Some Areas} But Here We Go... Heres A Quick List Of Celebrities Dissed... 1. Kobe Bryant 2. Elton John 2. Justin Timberlake 3. Ashton Kutcher 4. 50 Cent 5. Eminem/ Eminem Fans 6. Snoop Dogg 7. Nelly 8. Ja Rule ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now When You Hear The Gun-Firing And Beatings Best Believe I Caused Those-Sirens// But How Can I Be A Rapist I Guess I Aint-Trying, I'm Getting Shown Up By Kobe-Bryant// We Know From Your Aerial-Displays You Didn't Do What They-Say// But We Also Know In L-A Elton John-Ain't The Only Star That's-Gay//<<Hint>> Oh Shit, I Guess To-Take Stabs At Gays Was My Very First-Mistake// Especially When It's-Gay Enough To-Say "Hi, I'm Justin Timberlake"// "And Britney Spears Dumped Me So I Think Of Ashton Kutcher When I Masturbate// "I Guess After A While Ashton's Nagging Finally Got-To-Me// He Would Beg-And-Plead, And He Convinced-Me To Commit-Sodomy// It Was A Sucking-Spree As I Dropped My Pants And Got On-My-Knees// A Smile-Of-Glee Crept Across His Face As He Jumped In My Ass Like A-Wallabee// Was That Too-Mean And Evil Minded…Did I Just Say Something I Would-Resent?// Ok, Ill Move To Someone Everyone Loves To Hate…That Faggot Named 50 Cent// Speaking A Mumbled Language That He-Invents So No One Knows What He-Meant// His Songs Lack-Content So He Thinks He Can Cover It Up With An-Accent// Stuck On Eminem and Dre's Dicks Like His Asshole Was Full Of-Cement// I Got Another Gigantic Beef, A Double Whopper, I Know Its Not Any Of My-Business// But I'm Getting-Sick Of Little-Kids With A Raised -Fist Yelling Out "Hi!-My-Name-Is"// But Three Albums Full Of How Much You Hate Kim, Its Getting Really Boring// Teeni Boppers Don't Request Your Shit On TRL Any More, There All Fucking Snoring// Yet Another Swing Coming At Someone Else, But I'm Not Gonna Call Your Name Out// You'd Be Too Be Too-High-To-Realize, Then Be-Surprised And Probley Throw Your Hip Out// Ya Ancient, But Then ya Get All Depressed And Probley Pull Your Bag Of Weed Out// Oh That's Right You Quit…If He-Quits I'd Cut My-Wrists With A-Key And Watch-Me Bleed-Out// Have Ya Figured Out Ya Name, Or Are You Too High, Do I Have To Read It-Out// Its Snoop Doggy Dogg, The LBC Dawg, Ok Dawg Get The Fuck-Out// You Still Want To Put Your Songs On The Radio In Give You An Ear-Ful// Ya Best Be-Careful Cuz Ya Old News And My Rhymes Are So-'Beautiful"// OK, Time To-Produce Enough-Abuse To Leave Ya Pansy Ass In A-Noose// The Sell Out, The Mayor Of Nellyville… [Sing] Im Talking Bout That Pimp Juice// He Went From "Going Down Down Baby" To "Taking-Off-Your-Clothes"// He Made The Same Transistion, From Being Loved To Hated By-Homophobes// The Faggot Can't Rap So As Filler Hes Shoving In Plugs For His Lines-Of-Clothes// He Can't Get Any-Hoes, So Hes Paying Hookers To Take Their-Blows// Cuz No Chicks Take Him Seriously, His Fan Base Is Twelve-Year Olds// Ask Any Person On The Street If Nelly's Straight You'll Get A Resounding "Maybe"// But I See Right Through The Mist…Why You Think He Says "Im Going Down, Down Baby?"// No Subliminals Here, The Truth Speaks Through Me, And I Speak The-Truth// This Is-Cruel Like A Sleep Over At A Catholic-School// But I'm Bringing The Pain To Murder Inc, More Specifically Ja-Rule// The Hip-Pop Don't Work, Keep It "Between-You-And-Your-Crew"//<<That Song "Every Little Thing That We Do Should Stay Between Me And You>> Wow, Im Tired From All Those Wannabes Ive Been-Smoking// This Is A Dose Of Reality And A2Z Has Just Spoken// ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I Would Like Feedback On This Verse DO NOT GIVE FEEDBACK AS TO WHO I DISS...I DONT CARE IF YOU LIKE 50 CENT OR NOT...I WANT FEEDBACK TO THE VERSE! I Will Return The Favor, Just Drop A Link |
yo it was aite kinda out of structure up the vocab and itll be strate, but peep my shit out
kamunition |
long as hell
but well worth the read most definitely you had some slick lines in there that justin timberlake gay thing..was bothering me a bit but it was funny nelly ville snoop 50 em kobe mad heads got it you should try this out in audio i bet it would sound ill try that...anyways, much respects, peace thun |
Eh... it's aite, u got good metas and shit like that, but like the guy said... ur structure is off a lil bit... and the flow is really slow. still good though...
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nice attempt....but i thought it wasn't all that good.....nothin really
made me laugh....and on a diss drop......it suppose to at least make u laugh...... |
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