Heavyweight Title. [Champ] 13th Disciple (2-0) vs. G. Hod (2-0)
 

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Whats Really Good...........

here. . how abouts dropping early? today or tomorrow?

thats tight.......tomorrow it is.......good luck.....

okay.....ur prolly waiting for me too drop first....not a problem......
lets do this........



yo....yo.....come on come on.....yo yo.......


ur a pretty good lyricist but u have no chance at all.......i verbally
split skulls like the Hulk when Bruce Banner is pissed off/this dude
is awfully fucked when dueling wit Gods Kin, cuz like Homos
during tug of war, this faggot isn't pulling off the win/savage wit
sounds of sin.....fist exploding thru appendages, venom syringes
wit swift motion/bitch hopin.....hit u black and blue like africans
gazing into the ocean/my atrocious bars are blazin, tiring ur mind
when i double park in ur zone of contimplation/ur thoughts
replaced wit objects laced wit the image of me tossin asteroids
into masses to rock ur nation/ur verse wouldn't be seen if ya
attempted to text in in the sky wit 8 jets/ud swear u need
protection the way u gettin fucked when i lay-text (latex)/this
kid must be a gay flower pot.....the way his ass get soiled and
dug/and ur skill will never be highly elevated....even if it was
influenced by drugs/so ima spit this quick verse to show everyone
the skills that u lack/cuz ur like a running shoe wit holes.....ull
never get on a track/gettin ya ankles broke like playing basketball
in chucks/i'm detecting smucks, ya keyboard is ya chance to win,
i suggest u start pressing ur luck/so don't get mad if i lay u down
quick like sex on the first date/ya verse is all slick cheap talk
like oily discount books on tape/ur hearts racin.....i'm gunnin to
bust this bitches face in/if punches are food for thought......G.Hod
will die of starvation...........................served....... ...............1

This means Jihad.

I own you. I won’t stop coming until this vocal extortion’s finished. .
13 was “Buy One, Get One” at the local abortion clinic. . (he got lucky)
A Disciple, eh? Without a doubt, my Jihad’s psalm is hotter
And I educate the Regime so much, P3 is their alma-mater
I mean, seriously. . Retaining this title is an idea not only far, but fetched
I scar this “vet,” the cat still doesn’t realize that his freaking b a r s a r e s t r e t c h e d
He’s got a ring of riders. . When I win, half of em will be datin’ me
They’ve been on his genitals since day one. . They’ll stay from point A2Z (biotch!)
Soon to be twenty-three losses? The Clippers of RB, but don’t be bothered I won
The realization is, if his kid’s a winner, then G. must’ve fathered his son
“G. called you an orphan!” The “father” cries like a snitch to his kiddie
Haters? How can you blame your losses on that when you’re a bitch by committee? (since 2003!)
When I’m through with you, coincidence? Your age will match your losses (twenty-three)
If this chump’s life is a Mortal Kombat then this stage is stashed with bosses
I’m vicious. . Go ahead and steal my prototype, cause I attack mock G.’s
You’ll need it, because your AIM ring is as worn out as your caps lock keys

Sixteen. Atta.

Is The Winner Of This Battle The Best Of The Site?

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Good ComeBack....And LEt The Votings Commence.....................1

ok heres the way A2Z reads it:

13th Disciple: Your Format Is Starting To Piss The Hell Outta Me, Just Do It Like G.Hod And make it easier to read...decent punches a couple stood out in my mind:

ud swear u need protection the way u gettin fucked when i lay-text (latex}

^^Not bad

G.Hod I Am royally pissed about getting my name thrown around when really i dont care for 13...that did not affect my vote at all, i just want to clear that up...soe nice punches:


I own you. I won’t stop coming until this vocal extortion’s finished. .
13 was “Buy One, Get One” at the local abortion clinic.

^^LOL

I mean, seriously. . Retaining this title is an idea not only far, but fetched
I scar this “vet,” the cat still doesn’t realize that his freaking b a r s a r e s t r e t c h e d
^^Thats funny cuz its so true

RECAP: Nice battle, not the best heavywieght bought ive seen but not the worst...you both came nice, but I think G.Hod inched you out here

VOTE- G.Hod

^^dont you think that vote might be a little biased? i mean, he is a member of the committee.......


ok...

13th-
ur verse wouldn't be seen if ya
attempted to text in in the sky wit 8 jets/ud swear u need
protection the way u gettin fucked when i lay-text (latex)/this
kid must be a gay flower pot.....the way his ass get soiled and
dug/and ur skill will never be highly elevated....even if it was
influenced by drugs/so ima spit this quick verse to show everyone
the skills that u lack/cuz ur like a running shoe wit holes.....ull
never get on a track/

^^these were the only lines that i was feeling in your verse...you seemed to have an awful lot of filler and didnt really focus on punches....

LyricAli-
I own you. I won’t stop coming until this vocal extortion’s finished. .
13 was “Buy One, Get One” at the local abortion clinic. . (he got lucky)
A Disciple, eh? Without a doubt, my Jihad’s psalm is hotter
And I educate the Regime so much, P3 is their alma-mater
I mean, seriously. . Retaining this title is an idea not only far, but fetched
I scar this “vet,” the cat still doesn’t realize that his freaking b a r s a r e s t r e t c h e d
He’s got a ring of riders. . When I win, half of em will be datin’ me
They’ve been on his genitals since day one. . They’ll stay from point A2Z

^^ill


I’m vicious. . Go ahead and steal my prototype, cause I attack mock G.’s
You’ll need it, because your AIM ring is as worn out as your caps lock keys


^^good closer. you seemed to focus a tad too much on his age mentioning it on multiple occausions...however, in my opinion you still did win this battle...not buy much, but a win nonetheless.

vote= Ali

im goin wiv 13, just felt his flow more, it was i gud battle n close but 13th's verse went down beta in my head!

vote= 13th

edit - Nevermind - Sureal

Pretty Nice Battle

Vote Ghod

Just felt his punches more. Came with more personals. That barsarestretched line had me laughing. 13 came pretty nice as usual but i think Ali edged him out on this on.

ur a pretty good lyricist but u have no chance at all.......i verbally
split skulls like the Hulk when Bruce Banner is pissed off/this dude
is awfully fucked when dueling wit Gods Kin, cuz like Homos
during tug of war, this faggot isn't pulling off the win/

ehh...ok i guess

savage wit
sounds of sin.....fist exploding thru appendages, venom syringes
wit swift motion/bitch hopin.....hit u black and blue like africans
gazing into the ocean/my atrocious bars are blazin, tiring ur mind
when i double park in ur zone of contimplation/ur thoughts
replaced wit objects laced wit the image of me tossin asteroids
into masses to rock ur nation/

uhm...u said ur bars are atrocious so u are actually Dissing urself....

ur verse wouldn't be seen if ya
attempted to text in in the sky wit 8 jets/ud swear u need
protection the way u gettin fucked when i lay-text (latex)/

ehh kinda played

this
kid must be a gay flower pot.....the way his ass get soiled and
dug/and ur skill will never be highly elevated....even if it was
influenced by drugs/so ima spit this quick verse to show everyone
the skills that u lack/cuz ur like a running shoe wit holes.....ull
never get on a track/

played shit again

gettin ya ankles broke like playing basketball
in chucks/i'm detecting smucks, ya keyboard is ya chance to win,
i suggest u start pressing ur luck/so don't get mad if i lay u down
quick like sex on the first date/ya verse is all slick cheap talk
like oily discount books on tape/ur hearts racin.....i'm gunnin to
bust this bitches face in/if punches are food for thought......G.Hod
will die of starvation

wasnt really feeling much of this...seen better from u....

hod


I own you. I won’t stop coming until this vocal extortion’s finished. .
13 was “Buy One, Get One” at the local abortion clinic. . (he got lucky)

aight tho a bit played but the 13 part and his name made it alittle more original

A Disciple, eh? Without a doubt, my Jihad’s psalm is hotter
And I educate the Regime so much, P3 is their alma-mater
I mean, seriously. . Retaining this title is an idea not only far, but fetched
I scar this “vet,” the cat still doesn’t realize that his freaking b a r s a r e s t r e t c h e d

aight personal

He’s got a ring of riders. . When I win, half of em will be datin’ me
They’ve been on his genitals since day one. . They’ll stay from point A2Z (biotch!)

damn...nice personal

Soon to be twenty-three losses? The Clippers of RB, but don’t be bothered I won
The realization is, if his kid’s a winner, then G. must’ve fathered his son

bleh...not feeling

“G. called you an orphan!” The “father” cries like a snitch to his kiddie
Haters? How can you blame your losses on that when you’re a bitch by committee? (since 2003!)

aight

When I’m through with you, coincidence? Your age will match your losses (twenty-three)
If this chump’s life is a Mortal Kombat then this stage is stashed with bosses
I’m vicious. . Go ahead and steal my prototype, cause I attack mock G.’s
You’ll need it, because your AIM ring is as worn out as your caps lock keys

decent closer...overall felt u had a much better verse,had more hard hitting personals and punches...

vote= g hod

^ I am going to have to aggree with E..

I just felt G.hod Verse all around..

At times i felt 13 was forcing some of his punches..

Fun battle to read


Vote G.Hod

blah.........appreciate the votes....good battle................................