1st Rhyme give me sum feedback
 

Step aside/u dont wanna collide/u can run but u cant hide/im bout to start i riot/grab Emcees and eat um for my diet/u cats is all punchlines/i ll eat u cats for lunch time/i strike down on u like thunder/its a wonder i havent put u 6' feet under/im a convict u cus im the jury and the judge/u think u packin heat but ur really packin fudge/people come from all around to hear me speak/to get a sneak peak/and watch me add one more to ur losing streak/
but i dont rap to be funny/ i dont rap for the money/im so rich i need protection/ got so much dough i could give u a yeast infection/(get it)fake rappers wearin fake platnium bitch ill give you a smack/steal ur chain and make you buy it back/ but the only thing smaller than yo dick is your paper stack/....so when u battle me u betta give it ya most im a kill u then make fun of ya ghost/.

ok 2 things

1. Write Your rhymes//
like this from//
now on cuz its so much//
easier to read//

2. Actually rap ABOUT something, done say random shit that rhymes

Likewise...