((((((((((((death)))))))))))))) Must Peep
 

Death?..Only the end of our physical shell/
When physic's forces us 2 new realms 2 dwell/
Heaven?..A mirrored reflection of our so-called Hell/
The difference?...The purchased price of the soul we sell/
The cost?...On Hell's side we're charged infinite light/
Given in exchange 4 infinite night/
In Heaven?...The cost comes @ the price of our pride/
The willingness 2 put any difference aside/
Those that reside in Heaven lose face/
The soul burns forth with light in it's place/
Eyes no longer make up our optical vision/
Sight?...Brought about thru mental precision/

Death? A seperate plane with opposing opposite ends/
Question not your own death but where life will truly begin/

Short........but was ai
you had some ok vocab and it flowed
try to develop a bit more complexity
some better wordplay, and you'll be good

-pz

Well, I liked it Thought it was on point,

A little short but had some eye catchers