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Mis.Tique 07-15-03 04:43 PM

Loves Gifts
 
kind of complacent to what im feelin lately...umm yea it was a quick keystyle...


Bring me the setting sun casting glow over the glistening ocean
He turned to her she saw it in his eyes
Present the ocean to me he told her
With tears in her eyes she wept, each tear complete with the salty water sitting on her cheek
and love

Bring me the freedom she said
IN reply he handed her its feather freshly fallen from the hummingbirds wing
Give me growth he asked
She planted him a sapling and watered it daily
with her love

Give me knowledge, and each day she told him everything she knew
I want diamonds she said, and he took her to the grass and layed with her staring at the stars
acknowledging their love

Give me love they asked
And they took palm and palm and grasped
with their love

Da NFamous 07-15-03 05:33 PM

I like it but i dont know if i can relate to it i kinda liked te imagery but i didnt feel it was powerful enough and didnt hit me in that place but i respect ur ability mama, 1luv.


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