Our Problem(Short Drop Gimme Some Feedback)
 

Politicians makin choices in their thousand dollar suits
While homeless people deal wit those decisions wearin scuffed up boots
Drugs infuse da youth racism from ignorant folk who dont know their roots
Damn da government 4 publishin history books that dont relate da truth
Natives are still bein forced from da belly of their domain
The rainforest is bein chopped and innocent animals are bein slain
Shits lame we import cows in their place so McDonalds can gain
Take da time out and here the earth grown in pain
We're sick with no fuckin remedy this world will soon be a memory
While we drown in expensive hennessy our people are pinchin pennies





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nice short drop, very political, not many people do that kinda verse...Make it longer if ya can and it'd be really good

check my verse out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65833

its cool homie like whyte ave said "very political nice drop n try to make it longa"

^aight i will thank u niggaz

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gimme some feedback come on

this was a trufal drop........short but sweet......good topic....had allright but not great flow........enjoyd it for how short it was.....peace

^thank u

This was nice... great topic... much better flow and vocab then the last drop I read of yours... keep elevatin'.

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mad political, simple flow, stayed on topic... could have used a little more Mmph to it ya know, pizzaz or some shit.. lol, I liked it tho..

Cool thanks 4 feedback