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Raz Vs. Peyo
Ok Rules go:
10 lines no crew/hate/dick ryde votes feeding reccling prewriting etc. I'll spit first, but we check in First.....verse due 30-40 minutes after check in.... (a bit tooooo long but i guess i'll be fair, so i won't catch no bitchin....) And wit dat................. LET THIS SHIT BEGIN |
Yo Raz in this biatch checkin in..............
should drop in a lil ............ i guess peyo isn't gonna be online tonight so dawg Post asap.... so this shit will get moving and over wit........... |
Quik shit ta get tha blood goin.....
uh uh yo.......uh executive shiiiiiiiiit.......uhhuh uh yo yo..... yo ya posts on this site is just fuckin litterin// this kats verse to me will prolly be "N.Y.G" co-written// how can u really log on feelin good about yo skill// thats fuckin stupid, like gangsta rap acceptin lauren hill// nah dawg go ta tha "poetry" section kuz we all better than u// no fuckin gangstaz will accept u, not even tha ones from stacker 2// i don't jab and move, i just knock muhfuckaz out// dawg if u on tha road ta stardom u needa finda new route// yo from da suites ta da streets, bringin defeats, to all and each// killa from lion ta leach, long ass reach rather choke slam than teach// Throws Peyo da mic word woulda liked more lines but oh well..... |
CHeckin in just got on
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Beginning
Aiyo the executives said lets beat the N.Y.G for practice, shit they'd have a better chance havin sex with a cactus// The fact is I'm merkin ya with ease, ask us, when the crew battle goes down, ya ain't gonna smash us// Building Up Ya learning from QB Snyper, ya biting all ya rhymes, the grand jury is inditing ya cause all your raps are crimes// Ya mouth is filled with fecies cause you have shitty spits, ya crew wants ta throw ya out cause ya throw hissy fits// Admit I'm nice, what do I gotta say it twice, I guess I do cause ya find it incomprehensable that in rap, I own a slice// Ya using a three year olds blind vocabulary like ya chasing mice, ya at the tail of this site, ya gonna get diced//(in 3 blind mice there tails got diced off) Ya a farmers wife, sittin in bed thinkin, oh my god I love this life//(another reference to 3bm) Finisher Give up now before ya get lost in this mans world cause I doubt ya can handle it// ya use a bed pan cause ya too fat to get up, ya thought coloring yaself was how to tan a bit// ahhhhh that was weak |
honestly i was feelin raz on ths one but it was close very close
flow was about even, but i thought raz had betta punches vote goes to raz, but this battle could go either way good luk to both vote=raz |
yo imma say nothincuz raz said he voted for me in his post in my battle then he voted ill so for that imma hold my vote
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Now hold up did i vote for Ill? dude i could swore i voted for U in that shit............ Thats fuckin weird.........
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yo i dont wanna sound like a dick but
FUCK I FUCKING WOULD HAVE A FUCKING WIN BY NOW I BET SHIITITITITITITIITITITITITITITITIy well any way ill vote another battle from you 2 but im kinda hot in the head right now |
i like both verses but raz had better punch lines
VOTE: RAZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2 ^^ hit my battle up and drop a fair vote ^^^ |
honestly i was feelin peyo much more-like the complexity an vocab-nice work peyo-much better then what u dropped against me in elite....vote-peyo
drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7557#post627557 |
yo uppin this 2-0 thanx for tha vote ceasar oh and Spirit check ya Pm......... aight..........................
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aight man lol sorry bout the accusation but i won YEA that was the illest head beat yet so fuck yea im happy
vote.........raz ok i know this is going to look like d/r but raz was short sweet and hard also it was sweet the whole way peyo your shit got talent but the ill ness in raz's rhyme took it |
I was feeling peyo, cause his wordplay and structure, and flow. Raz had a good one, but his punches weren't his best...
VOTE=PEYO |
Im votin peyo b/c he had better wordplay. That 3-blind-mice spiel won me over, great battle from both sides though.
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