Pain (higher Intelligence)
 

Wrote this one a while back so let me know what you think...
(Feed back appreciated)

I AM THE HIGHER INTELLIGENCE....

My rhyme scheme comes quick like the flux capasator/ (Back.T.fut)
Battling you has become nothing but a lyrical massacre/
I cripple Mc's, now they cant count/
When they try to mimic my matmatical mouth/
Splitting brain cells like intersections/
Words coming from all directions/
Making ya earlobes burst in less than 60 seconds/
I keep the mic flow like voilinists and mystros/
Fried ya molecules and this is only the intro/
Battle axe wielding, crushing rib cages/
It amazes me how the pain can last for ages/
Mind more twisted than labryinthes and mazes/
My armory changes to the calibur of a katana/
The blades steel fused hotter than volcanic saunas/
I put Mc's through psychological trauma/
Brining enraged violence like the Los Angeles riots/
Level of fake mc's is negative minus/
Fists of fury, lock ya doors in a hurry/
Enemies just like squirells, they all scurry/
Locked in position my swords started its ignition/
Im ready to compete for the impossible mission/
Lost and found,.......and you still missing/
My minds more complex than Navaho code Encripting/
Your body left lifeless, I tell more truth than Tarot Card Psychic's/
Clog more nostrols than sickness and sinus/
I duplicate crimes for all mankind/
Challenging the truth like Zodiac Signs/
Staying well hidden like millitary mines/
Take sight from the unworthy and give on to the blind/
Only one last step accept the world is mine.......

I AM THE HIGHER INTELLEGENCE.....


Silence is an option....

When will you break it..?

let me get some feedback wheter you like it or not...

decent drop, nice vocabulary, the flow structure could use some work but overall decent drop

thanks appreciate the feedback

Maybe ur mouth iz faster than mine...cuz I couldn't get some of dat stuff out. But it wuz a very nice drop. I liked it...

yeah the flow fell off a whole lot of times during this... and at some points i didnt feel that it related to the title. i can tell that you are new at this and i can say for a newbie you are alright. if you work hard you can really do something but as for right now you need some work.

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No im not new to this it was something I wrote 1 and a half years
ago...( A While BACK)

thanks for the feedback though

honest opinions only help the MC

It was aiight.