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Gangsta One 07-16-03 03:21 PM

"I Can't see the Ligh'..." - A True Story
 
[Chorus]
I can't see the end of the tunnel//
The path Ima takin is a downwards funnel//
Niggaz hate me, bitches hate me...//
Ma own parents despise of me...//
What futa can I see...?//

[Verse 1]
Sometimes I feel like I'm hated//
When I do shi', I'm not appreciated//
I've done everythin' I could possibly do//
I've wrote I book, nobody's prouda me, what'd I prove?//
I'm treated like dirt on the groun'//
When a bitch turns me down I get down//
What I go through everyday, is eternal sorrow//
It's alo' like I don' want ta see tomorrow//
Even ma so called 'best friend' hates me//
Only thin' I seem ta live fo is bein' accepted inta the N.Y.G//
But, is that really worth livin' fo, a crew on RB?//
I'm I jus' fuckin' messed-up physically an' mentally?//
The en' of the tunnel, I can' see...//

[Chorusx2]

[Verse 2]
Why have I been put on dis Earth..?//
Why have I been put on dis rock of hurt..?//
Is it some curse that I've been cursed wit?//
That I have to put up wit dis fuckin' shi'?//
I would give ANYTHIN' to be a happy soul...//
BUt I can't see how, jus' through me and bury me in a whole...//
I'm gettin' frustrated now...I can't see the light...//
I pray every night://
"Lord, oh Lord! I'm done a'ight..?"//

[Chorusx3]

Yo, dis is true dawgz...feedback is great...

Gangsta One 07-16-03 03:51 PM

UPPIN'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

pot1ent 07-16-03 04:04 PM

you should be happy wit this gangsta1...it was nice.....................
.................................................. ...............................tite rhymes

Gangsta One 07-16-03 07:02 PM

Yo, dawg thx....uppin' fo some mo feedback........................

rule 07-17-03 06:20 AM

emotional drop man...i was feelin it...but it'd didnt seem to end...maybe one more verse an it'd be striaght clean a 10 out'a 10 for real keep spittin man i liked it though it was tight im uppen

Gangsta One 07-17-03 01:57 PM

Yo, thx fo da feedback. Maybe a lil' mo dawgz?

southsideloco 07-17-03 02:57 PM

that drop was deep i was feelin it

Gangsta One 07-17-03 03:07 PM

A'ight thx dawg.......UPPIN'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


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