Last Breath
 

This wuz somethin I did when I wuz bored. Let me kno bout my vocab, rhymin style, imagery, whateva...

Alwayz wuz a thug, alwayz wuz lonely
In this world full of sickoz and phoneyz//
Alwayz wanted a girl, neva could get one
As I sit back gropin tha trigga of dis gun//
Wonderin how life would be without me
Come on, a couple of monthz you would've forgot me//
Kept prayin to tha Lord and my Heavenly Savior
To save me from this moment and let death abade me//
As I keep writin rhymez for this lyrical book
As my body lay on the ground, it'z soul took//
As tha bullet piercez my brain, great mind slain
No more long-lastin pain, blood stopped in itz veinz//
Sirenz sound as my sensez begin fadin quickly
Feelin beat like the drugz do to Whitney//
Poundin on da door as blood stainz tha carpet
Door fliez open, my body'z a mosh pit//
Bullet lodge in my skull as my vision dullz
Seein Jesus himself in the other world//
Tearz fall from my soul as I suddenly grow cold
Rollin down tha mist that my new form takez hold//
Death creepz away as I'm in eternity
Tried to be a soldier but it still got tha-best-of-me//
As my throat get parched, fadin from Jesus's sight
As Hell surroundz my throat closin tight//
Feelin tha burnin sensation, no more emancipation
Shackled to tha mistake that has caused damnation//

Yo im feelin this...

I myself am a Christian, so I also believe that suicide= damnation

Life is a Bicth sometimes....

Everything was pretty good on this joint, deep....


I would appreciate if you hit mine up on Open Mic, its called:

PAIN (HIGHER INTELLIGENCE)

I'm a Christian too...but sometimez life putz you in that situation...so I rap about it to kool off...and I'll peep ur joint. Thanx 4 da reply...

True because yeah I know, people are gonna say be thankfull
for what you have, and I feel bad for those less fortunate but
you have to deal with your own problems too...

If it werent for damnation I would probally do it...

Cause sometimes I just grow sick of this life...(EARTH)

I could've done it...millionz of timez...but I affect too many livez to do it...would prob have otherz follow my stepz...

uppin dis...need feedback so i can improve...

Well this piece really got to me man, anything that deals with this kinda shit is always deep, I really liked this drop, nice flow and vocab...overall nice drop

Thanx man...I like writin deep stuff...

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