Nightmares
 

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Nightmares(footsteps)

i just wrote this tell me what you think you probably like it better if you actually heard it. shits called nightmares check it.

walkin down a dark alley at midnight/
pitch black wit no street light/
walking this empty road/
when suddenly you feel the air get cold/
you start to not feel so good/
cus' you know your in a bad neighborhood/
so you pick up the pace/
so you can get to a safe place/
you get scared and take a look around/
but theres no one in site, no one to be found/
when you hear footsteps behind you and you start to feel fear/
so you turn around but nobodys there/
you turn back hoping no one following you home/
knowing at any moment cats could put one in your dome/
u tell yourself ur safe and grab ya cross on ya chain to remind u/
but then again you hear someone behind you/
now your really shook/
but no ones there when you turn around to look/
so now you break into a cold sweat/
you hear a noise, but before you can turn around to check/
you feel two hands grab ya neck/
you dont know who it could be/
so you try to struggle free/
and try to fight/
but the hands are to tight/
you ask yourself "am i having a bad dream/
as you open your mouth to let out a scream/
but you cant even take a breath/
as two hands continue to strangle you to death/
then you feel something cold on the back of ya head/
you hear a click' and a boom' as you jump up in bed/
thinkin is this heaven, i must be dead/
but then right there/
you realize your having a nightmare/
as you lay up in your bed gaspin' for air/



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its okay..at first i didn't really feel it..i dont know..lines seemed too short for me..but its aight....nice..God bless..1..

^^^^^^^word, was very basic, elivation needed fosure,,, foundations tho cat .... keep droppin

that read like a poem duke.....a Dr. Seuss poem

thanks, give me some more feedback peeps

Decent pieace,nice flow good rhymes thats pretty much it..i wasent really feelin this you know what i'm sayin but thats tight

all i got to say is dont judge me by this piece i was just writin for fun but thanks for the comments

I LIKE BETTER AS A POETIC INTERPRITATION THERE IT WOULD BE STRONGER BUT NOT BAD AS A RHYME RETURN THE FAVOR PEEP MY TRACK REPPIN

YO KNOW MAN THAT WASN'T BAD YOU FINISHED IT OFF NICE...LYRICS NOT COMPLICATED YET WELL TOLD...SO YEA NOT BAD MAN...SPLIFF BACK