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I give mental -destructions- wit hardcore -corruptions- that cause organ -disfunctions- i dont allow -interuptions- or else ill get -paranoid- and hit u wit a force stronger than -steroids- //

Girls i -charish- but all the sluts will be -perished- u give me da -garbage- and ill eat ya ass like i was a fuckin -carnage- just killin niggas like -spawn- until da break of -dawn- //

Im da -panel- that keep u -chaneled- to burst out ya -information- cus im da one who sets da rules and -regulations- dont be da pussy and start sum -confrontation- cus im da type that rule da -nation- //

From my grip theres no -escape- but im nice to sale u -fish plates- and -chicken wings- for -sale- but when i gather my -siblings- they'll never have life in -jail- //

Dont give me ur bad -behavior- cus one day i could be ur -savior- and piss me off ill have u bald headed like -xavier- i got da skills to be -registered- i got connects larger than animal -herds- //

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7 tight vocab

need to work on bar structure though

anymore f/b

can i get sum feedback

i give you a 7 too, nice vocab, try puttin it in bars though, its easier to read

thanx anymore feedback

it was a nice freestyle man...nice vocab and nice multis were used, and it flowed nicely to man..nice drop
8/10

check my verse: Last Job,

thanx any more f/b

decent read

def need sum structure tho..vocab was nice..flow would be a hell of a lot better if u had the structure..wordplay was decent..i found 1 flaw ttho..u looked like u were takin words str8 out the dictionary..its good 2 be complex but u went a lil over board..simpleness is good sumtimes...

my shit aint come from dictionarys dawg thats all me, mo f/b

i give it an 8 b/c it had very nice wordplay and flow and it was some over all tight shit

thanx dawg

8/10
ur flow was good and u had good vocab
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thanx

i got one word-----HOT