Rain When I Die... & Time To Tell
 

tis short but its wot am feelin..

I hope it rains when i die - so i can grow again
a tear from your eye - so i can live again
wind blowing from the south - so i can feel again
a breathe from your mouth - so i can speak again
your voice in my ear - so i can sing again
a reason not to fear - so i can love again
an arm on which to lean - so i can walk again
just give me a reason - so i can live again...

infact ill stick in another one here... same length..

This is called "Time To Tell"

I know its time to tell my tale
my secret life i must unveil
to take the leap out of my hole
into the world it is my goal
yet still i stall i dare not tell
that beneath this face they know so well
there lies another that must come out
so that my lie i can live without

i especially like the first part, my fav line was "i hope it rains when i die- so i can grow again" hottness, i liked it man, pllease give me some feedback on my poem, 1luv.

shit was deep the first part was reall liked itkept me into the drop the whole time it was small simple but ugot ur point across in a controlled way