some shit
 

Im so ill if I cough I will make you sick
Beating me is hard like trying to drop a constipated shit
Im obligated to rockin stages this isnt even the hottest it gets
Watchin racists stomp familiar faces is the reason im droppin this
Life is complicated like walkin mazes treason is anonymous
The greatest topics that Optix raises make logic sense
Often wasted phrases wake amazement in college kids
Even rotten pages are causin changes for the positive

take it ur new to this....
but was actually not bad
some decent imagery....good flow
vocab was a bit basic...and first few lines were elimentary but i can see u've got potential to improve a great deal

that was pretty good for someone that was knew to this site good job

realy good for a newb nice work