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mercurio 07-19-03 01:22 PM

tel me wut yal think of this
 
Yo yo, this aint no baby mama drama song,
This is jus fo all yal to kno that I love my mom
That no matter wut ever happens, il b singin this song
If you leave me, so long.. I send my hope today
Put u in an envelope and send you away
With years of laughs, smiles and tears
Always remember how you sent away my fears
The monster under the bed, always creepin in my head
Go into my moms room, and the monster shrunk and fled
The monster was now dead, I was no longer in Dread
And now all was well under the bed of ned
You were a single mother, raising an only child
You had a responcibility so you couldn’t go out and be wild
But you never regretted it, I would always see you smile
Knowing that would always love me all the while
Meanwhile, I was hittin the streets hustling makin money
But now I kno to me, nuthin could replace my momy
N im not afraid to call u that anymore in front of my friends
The deep feelings I have for u, this rhyme will never end
Inside forever we spend, the time that you always lend
Even wen u have a meeting or somewhere to go
You always make time for me, and make sure that I know
That no matter how hard it gets, no matter who comes and goes (dad)
No matter who puts me down, I will never let my spirit go
For this I owe my greatfulness and gratitude
And apologize for any time I’ve ever been mad at you
Im jus so lucky I had u, and ur unconditional love
You truly are a gift, from the heavens above

mercurio 07-19-03 04:57 PM

aigt.. thanks everbody.. i see how u treat newbs.. guess it's a shame if sum1 wants to elevate

peace

southsideloco 07-19-03 05:05 PM

that was aight, it wouldve prolly sounded better if it was the poetic secton

check mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66848


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