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dw. 07-21-03 07:09 AM

dw vs thugzdocry (peep, shud be ILL)
 
10-15 lines max
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
no feedin

i'll spit first then u got as long as i take 2 reply!


check in dawg!

Edicius 07-21-03 07:12 AM

Chck in, i need the exercise didnt write in a few .......lol, .......start writin now , me is :p....................
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dw. 07-21-03 07:38 AM

neither av i, but ere goes,

YO, yo, yo—DW grabs the MiC, bitch ListeN =

Son, ur “ass” doin more “ridin” than a prostetute, u shud be thrown in a law suit for the way u pollute/
U rhyme like u on a diet~while my shit xtra “phat”, wot eva game hes playin, for both sides this cat bats/ (gay bitch)
Comin in ere telling me u the shit lukin 4 conflict, suck dicks of poll votes n still suffer an evict/
Man u TIGHT! But only wen dre gives u an invite, an insight 2 a verse from the “chronic” 2 bite/
Thugz u back 2 lose for my hat trick, beat u twice b4 cos my shit sticks, I rhyme sick so u back 2 read another ill verse quik/
Bitch u like a hand gun ready 2 shoot out wiv no lead, shot at my head but backfired now your dead/
Cry? Yes u do 4 days after I beat u, defeat u, leave u wiv no crew n gangstas sayin thugz who?/
Man u destined 4 the gutter, your life is the streets, a poor ass bitch who has a curb 4 his bed n his seat/
Who asks himself questions which personally contradict, picked the wrong G 2 battle to get ya ass licked/
U got a record which levels out at 19-19, need time 2 redeem c’in as the number of herbs u lost 2 is seventeen/ (lost 2 me twice)
Gonna leave this now but murder I predict, bitch giv this up n resume ya work at the red light district//

Alrite now u dawg!

Edicius 07-21-03 07:47 AM

Aight dawg ...

Facin this 'd'icksuckin 'w'ack-est fake-fag-''motherfucker'', dajum your ass so gay,walkin down the fukkin highway, as a drunk-ass-dick-sucker//
Tryin to get a fuck from a all day-long-on-the-road-no-pussy-in-months-mack-''trucker''//
This match aint worth your while cuz I'll merk this little fag with a big fukkin smile//
Cuz your rhymes are weak-wack and-disastrous like your faggot-ass-fake-style//
Your ass even has to pay to-get-a-fukkin-'rhyme' like 'blocked-sun' your ass dosn't have a motherfukkin chance to 'Shine'//
Check you can never be a 'g'.....your fake....try to sound like one....and promote yourself as a bad-ass netcee//
But even with a fukkin library of teacher's editions, this wack-ass-bitch couldnt beat me//
Yo face it bitch your screwed, your a fake ass jus need to wake up snitch *screams HELLO//
Your fukkin wack Lines are so crammed it wouldn’t fit a hit-with-Jello//
Your gonna swallow this shit, believe me, like a whore who's payd to drink, from 15 men who jus cum-in-a-cup//
Dont even talk jus 'S'hut the fuck up you little fag-'B'itch....cuz with my 'B'ullets I'll 'S'hoot your fake ass up//
Little asshole child-molesting-your-own-mother-rapin-drummer-in-goth-rock-bands//
Your trickery-can’t enrich your bar's with-gold-bricks-n-ya-hands//
'J'our style's wack fuck this shit you 'E'nvy me cuz your shit just 'R'usted...so jus say your fukkin pray//
Cuz battlin your ass against me is like visiting the King's family when your fag-ass-name is'J'ames-'E'arl-'R'ay//*

*only smart peepz understand this. lol

dw. 07-21-03 07:52 AM

alrite uppin this!
not bein funny dawg but how many times do u wanna say "faggot-ass-bitch" over n over, yawn yawn LOL! only messin tight shit dawg!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Roots 07-21-03 07:54 AM

i think dw was better his flowed better and i think ur flow was getting off at a point

dw= had better punches

vote=dw

man W.E.C
go to the flow lesson uil see wot i mean

Roots 07-21-03 07:55 AM

i keep getting this shit vBulletin Message
You did not post an explaination yet. Please post an explaination to vote.

flow=dw
punches=dw
worldplay=dw and thugz
multi's=dw and thugz

vote=dw

PlaGuE2 07-21-03 07:59 AM

lol, trust game ta know where exactly to go in WEC, shit if that WEC was a league Game wud win it.
Tight shit both ya'll................................

Roots 07-21-03 08:01 AM

plague stop sucking that fatests dick============================================== ===========or better yet the fatest thug

dw. 07-21-03 08:04 AM

alrite well thats 1-0 txt
but 0-0 poll still,

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

X2DICE 07-21-03 08:06 AM

yeah yeha yeha yo im feeling dw shit hi first line cracked me up
thugz had some tight shit to but im going with dw cos i thought his flow was nice

vote=dw

PlaGuE2 07-21-03 08:09 AM

Game dawg, i donno what ya get upto in your private life faggit, but leave it outa ma head, i dont wanna know whos dick your sucking, bad enough you ontop of everyones dick without ya suckin tha shit off nigga.

Fo' Real 07-21-03 08:31 AM

Son, ur “ass” doin more “ridin” than a prostetute, u shud be thrown in a law suit for the way u pollute/
U rhyme like u on a diet~while my shit xtra “phat”, wot eva game hes playin, for both sides this cat bats/ (gay bitch)
Comin in ere telling me u the shit lukin 4 conflict, suck dicks of poll votes n still suffer an evict/
Opener 2 lines were tight, 3rd line lacked a bit, seemed like a bit of a filler, had no real point ta it.

Man u TIGHT! But only wen dre gives u an invite, an insight 2 a verse from the “chronic” 2 bite/
Thugz u back 2 lose for my hat trick, beat u twice b4 cos my shit sticks, I rhyme sick so u back 2 read another ill verse quik/
Bitch u like a hand gun ready 2 shoot out wiv no lead, shot at my head but backfired now your dead/
1st lines was aight, lacked that sumfin sumfin... second lines was tight tho, flow went off a bit but.. 3rd line was quite poor.. lacked a decent punch

Cry? Yes u do 4 days after I beat u, defeat u, leave u wiv no crew n gangstas sayin thugz who?/
Man u destined 4 the gutter, your life is the streets, a poor ass bitch who has a curb 4 his bed n his seat/
Who asks himself questions which personally contradict, picked the wrong G 2 battle to get ya ass licked/
1st line first line was tight... nice stuff there.. 2nd was aight aswell, nothing stood out in it really though..3rd line was wack.. seriously.

U got a record which levels out at 19-19, need time 2 redeem c’in as the number of herbs u lost 2 is seventeen/ (lost 2 me twice)
Gonna leave this now but murder I predict, bitch giv this up n resume ya work at the red light district//
first line was coo, nothin special, second line was bit played, seen it too much.

Now Thugz Verse

Facin this 'd'icksuckin 'w'ack-est fake-fag-''motherfucker'', dajum your ass so gay,walkin down the fukkin highway, as a drunk-ass-dick-sucker//
Tryin to get a fuck from a all day-long-on-the-road-no-pussy-in-months-mack-''trucker''//
This match aint worth your while cuz I'll merk this little fag with a big fukkin smile//
Cuz your rhymes are weak-wack and-disastrous like your faggot-ass-fake-style//
Damn is all a can say for first line lol, bit packed with motha fucka n dick ass sucker n al that, but it was aight.. Second n third lines were aight, good flow ta em.... 4th line good, nice punch.

Your ass even has to pay to-get-a-fukkin-'rhyme' like 'blocked-sun' your ass dosn't have a motherfukkin chance to 'Shine'//
Check you can never be a 'g'.....your fake....try to sound like one....and promote yourself as a bad-ass netcee//
But even with a fukkin library of teacher's editions, this wack-ass-bitch couldnt beat me//
Yo face it bitch your screwed, your a fake ass jus need to wake up snitch *screams HELLO//
niccccccceeeeeeeeeee first line, mad ill, second line nice too, good punch.. 3rd line was good, seen it played a bit but nice, 4th wasnt so good, the HELLO thing let it down..

Your fukkin wack Lines are so crammed it wouldn’t fit a hit-with-Jello//
Your gonna swallow this shit, believe me, like a whore who's payd to drink, from 15 men who jus cum-in-a-cup//
Dont even talk jus 'S'hut the fuck up you little fag-'B'itch....cuz with my 'B'ullets I'll 'S'hoot your fake ass up//
Little asshole child-molesting-your-own-mother-rapin-drummer-in-goth-rock-bands//
not bad first line.. nice 2nd n third, also nice switch in the 3rd.. maaaaaad multi in 4th line lol had a laugh with that one

Your trickery-can’t enrich your bar's with-gold-bricks-n-ya-hands//
'J'our style's wack fuck this shit you 'E'nvy me cuz your shit just 'R'usted...so jus say your fukkin pray//
Cuz battlin your ass against me is like visiting the King's family when your fag-ass-name is'J'ames-'E'arl-'R'ay//*
nice finishing here, specially the last one, mad nice meta, very ill donno if many people will get it tho

Punches... Thugz
Wordplay... dw
Metas... Thugz
Multis... dw
Flow... Thugz

Vote: Thugz

Edicius 07-21-03 08:47 AM

Now thats what i call a vote , nice and thnx for the well explained vote..........................
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Edicius 07-21-03 08:49 AM

About the endin james earl ray is the killer of Martin Luthor King R.I.P.............fo peeps who didnt know.......hes the one arrested for the killin of the referent.........so ..............
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