Freestyle
 

bringing khaos through my rhymes, rippin rappers from time 2 time
bringin astoniushment when u hearin my vibes
bringin the things that im bringin, time too rearrange
bringin my boys wit LAN,time too put u in ur place
bringin flip mode drops that will make u get ill
bringin girls luvin, and handin them the mornin after pill
bringin elevatin,cos thats wat im doin im still gettin iller
bringin rhymes like jason divert my mind away from bein a killer
bringin this here rhyme tooo ur eyes, respect it and respect me,
cos its out of order if u dont

YOU BROUGHT IT...LOL
RAN SHORT BUT ITS A FR\EESTYLE SO I CANT KNO9CK IT.
HAS GREAT POTENTIAL BUT THIS FELL SHORT YOU CAN TELL THIS WAS A HUGE EFFORT FOR YOU SO THERE IS POTENTIAL HOLL RETURN THE FAVOR

Lmao, i aint like it man, too short, a couple of the rhymes were too basic, no internals or multi's, no imagery or emotion, just basic rhyming words.

Elevate.

Not bad but u could do better

thanx uppin

Yuk
elevate and when freestyling dont ever say that shit again

its to short wasnt realing feelin it but it was still kinda good

try to make it longer next time and put some internal in there is ya can :) still aiight tho

freestyle was more of a word rhyme game no real topic at hand and thats what made it wack.....