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Rematch: (U.T)Feeble Minded vs. Bash(B.R.E)
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No crew votes No dickriding No hate votes All votes must be explained You spit first Due: Whenever you want it too be due |
yo bash ........feeble dont come on till late n he might not see this so i think its a lil fuckin harsh the due dates tomorow ...............so wait till he checks in to start a due date aight
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yo...
I SPIT FIRST LAST TIME... U FIRST THIS TIME!!!!!!!! ???????????????????? and ill spit the night that u spit......>>>> u will see my spit the next day no matter what... just spit whenever u want... and its a good thing i felt like readin good battles cuz usually i dont come in here cuz no one votes..... GO! ...peace.... |
Check this out feeble...............................
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yo feeble this is a crew battle so take this kidd down, ya lost in the frontlines but ya did go first last time so the outcome might be different, take him down i kno ya can cuz u got some skillz wit ya, holla, and good luck
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I can “Decipher” your “Lines” like I play “Scrabble” and “Text-Twist"/
get your “Chest-Hit” when I “Twist my Text” into “Clips” then “Shoot” out my “Tech”/ Knockout Blows Sprayed , While Feeble is 'Packin Very Little Punches', Like 'Midgets Employed By Kool-Aid'/ (Get it) Make Feeble Ice An 'Rep A Set' , Ya Life is The 'Opposite of Shaq At Freethrow lines', 'Nothin-But-Net'/ U a Trainee Not A Soldier but U Can Still Get Ur Head Cracked, So Step Back Cause My Bullets Like Little Meteors because They Cause MASS Destruction Wit' "A Smidge Of Impact", I'll Send-u-Losses, Leave Ur Team Wit "Heavy Blood Lost" N Put Ur Men-On-Pauses(menopause) I'll Leave This "Bitch-In-Tha-Dark" When I "Click-And-Spark", I Might "Split-Ya-Heart"/ He still wouldnt be able too hit me even if he "Swing-Both-Ways" Like "Kids-In-Tha-Park"/ "Rip-Him-Apart", Let Tha Bullet "Poke-Thru-Ya-Dome"/ You "Out-Of-my-Range" Like "Long-Distance" On "Nokia Phones"/ I've Learned That I'm "Scarin-Him" He Knows He "Wants-No-Beef" Like "Conservative-Vegetarian"(conservative=refuse to change)- He's A Humiliation Tha "Skeleton-Wearin-His-Skin", To Say "Nice-Try" After This Wouldn't Be "Fair-To-Him/ My Punches "Land-directly-in-His-Mouth", This Nigga Need "Doctor's-Help" To Establish Himself As The "Man-Of-The-House"/ He Can't Get Tha "Upper-Hand-In-This-Bout"/ You "Play-Me-Close", I'll Invite "Tiger-Woods" To Yo "Gravesite", Just too Have Him Play Your Eighteen-Holes"/ (Sick line right here , think about it) Stop "Pinin'" Because You "Behind-Me", Bakin Ya "Yeast" Infection The Only Way You "Makin-Dough"/ I'm out..Spit ur shit |
If u think it's too long , juss inform me , and I will remove some lines...
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yo..listen up ...please read the whole thing! some parts may be iller than others (all is ill tho lol)...thanks.
yo... we all know this guys gay..cuz he gives heterosexuals glaring-hates..this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits!// (bearing straights) lol! explanation...the bering strait is a waterway near alaska, and gay people have to bear straights...2 slash-his-hopes and throw out words-of-wrath..cuz like injured felines im gonna hurt-this-cat// his words is like garbage trucks they carry dirty-trash..his opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash// 5 i'll admit he's beat a rapper..he was proud to say he did-the-crime..until the press released that the kid-was-nine!// lol he was proud of his punch..except that it was-mine! cuz like auctioned-watches all he does is bid-for-time!// 8 its like crashing-parties..cuz im serving bash-merkings..he took all day to write that shit..although i tried to stop his ass-working!// (a bash is a party) 10 if this was a topical about life, we'd see bash-gone..cuz last time i checked its easy enough to say he has-none!// im electin bash as nun!..cuz it'd make ya seem even holier with a gash-son!!// (nun is holy, gash is a hole) 12 i hold his mind captive..like storing-his-brain-in-a-box..even though his game-is-on-lock..i dont give herbs second chances so i spray-him-with-glocks// 14 its like a prisoner bit his brain cuz i captive-ate his mind!..he cant see me winning so i laugh and say he's blind// 16 SERVED.. i dont even need this part..cuz i already won-this-battle...but i wished they banned for sucking..i know someone to tattle!// (tattle on) FINISHED.. didn't they teach you in school? its not smart to face kings... now you'll know for the future..feeble minds do great things!// lmao! served.... vote... |
vote like this:
personals- these are name disses....ex: opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash// wordplay- using one word to sound like another....my first bar had one...this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits (bearing straights) punches- (duh) who had the best peeps. metties: comparin one thing to another... multis-rhymin more than one word in a sentence...like this: i captivate his hate he aint straight...(a bad example but u get it) oops...this is elite i prolly just wasted my time but fuck it..... |
uppin vote pansies........................................... .................................................. .....................................
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oh and why did you edit?
vote anyway peeps....i still won i think i dont care if he edited....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
personals- FEEBLE, I ONLY SEEN 1 SO I'LL TAKE THE 'S' OFF PERSONALS LOL NAH JUST PLAYIN..YA HAD 2 SO YEA FEEBLE
wordplay- BOTH, I THINK WORD PLAY WAS SORTA EVEN punches- BOTH, SO MANY I FEEL LKE QUOTIN, BUT WON'T metties: BOTH multis- BOTH OVERALL I GIVE MY VOTE TO FEEBLE, IT WAS SORT OF CLOSE BUT AS I ALWAYS SAY..PERSONALS ALWAYS MAKES A DIFFERENCE HIT THIS UP WITH A FAIR VOTE, APPRECIATE IT: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68263 |
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Because my verse was long as fuck , so i removed some lines , I dont care who wins , because It's just da net |
OH THATS A GOOD REASON............................................ .................................................. ..............................................
SHOULDA SAID U WERE TAKIN LINES OUT.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> GOOD BATTLE....1 |
Personals - Feeble like Brook said didnt saw that much pers
Multi's - Bash Punches - I would have say both but, Bash had some nice punches combined with hot multis, so bash get this Mett - Both Wordplay - both Overall nice battle enjoyed readin the verses but bash took this in my eyes.....he had some harder punches and that takes battles, very nice battle..props to you both Vote-Bash |
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