All She Wanted : GoD pOeM
 

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Im Scared To Be Alone... But Im More Scared To Be With You
Tears Fall From My Eyes I Wipe Them With A Tissue
Whats The Issue?
I Miss You.. But I Have To Let You Go
You Only Want One Thing From Me And It Obviously Shows
Complain You Need Some Lovin But I Give You All The Rest
I Comfort You And Feed You, Why All You Want Is Sex?
I Made Sacrifices For You But You Just Dont Understand
I Abandon Someone Who Loved Me So You And I Could Have A Chance
I Was Stuck In A Sticky Situation Trynna Get Out
I Know It Didnt Make You Happy... There Was No Doubt
I Had To Do What I Could To Stay Alive And Survive
But You Just Thought I Was Telling You Lies
There Is So Much On My Mind Dont Think This Pen Can Write It All
My Legs And Knees Are Shaking But I Must Keep Standing Tall
With Every Day That Passes More Emotions Generate
Insinuating That I Need You But Myself I Cant Relate
Love Comes And Goes But In Your Heart It Stays
Pain Got Me Wishin Those Memories I Could Just Erase
I Dont Understand Where This Is Coming From And Dont Know Where Its Going
I Might Be A Rose From Concrete But At Least I Am Growing
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Raw. From what i read, you vented your emotions real well with this piece. But without sacrificing too much of the overall 'execution' of the piece. i.e. it had some slightly profound moments in it.

Parts of it cliche, but it's a venting piece. And i don't usually care too much about cliche either. it's all good...

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^^^^^^^^ i totally agree with varentao


keep elevating


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