getting back in the habit (8 lines, 5 syllable rhymes..)
 

my rhymes are hard-to-the-core, like an undrillable mine
i got unstoppable flows, and an unkillable mind
you're still a baby emcee, with your umbilical line
look at you tryna battle, with your one syllable rhyme
frontin like your strapped with guns, like you blast shotty's at night
fuck imaginary guns, I use karate to fight
I deliver some quick hits, and shock your body with fright
Leaving you scared stiff, in the first porto-potty in sight

I hadn't written for over a month so I thought I should get back into the habit. For about a year, I think I'm going to try to write a verse or two a week so I don't stay out of practice.

Any comments or how to get better would be appreciated. Thanks for reading.

-Chris

haha nice

thanks. i should've put in more than 8 lines, huh? sometimes i just don't feel like writing more than a few lines at a time