First Draft Of "Letters Of Goodbye"
 

Usually I dont post my first draft of any song, but hey im bored

"Letters Of Goodbye"
Lyrics By: A2Z
Beat: "Suicide Letters" by Tech N9ne


The World Is A Blur-To-Me//
The Way-You-Scream Hits Deep In The Heart-Of-Me//
Theres Part-Of-Me Thats Losing The Urge-To-Be//
Its Like Ever Time-You-Breath You Take A Part-Of Me//
Why Cant-You-See Thats-It-Seems Like God Is-Avoiding-Me//
I Take A Step-Towards-The-Lord But Demons Keep On-Tormenting-Me//
Theres An Uprising-Of-Blashphemy Bubbling At The Core-Of-Me//
Now That We Are-No-More Theres No Reason To Live Anymore-For-Me//
As-I-Breathe I Can-Feel-Me Edging Ever Closer-To-Catstrophe//
The Coward's Way Out, But I Would Have Taken Someone Else-With-me//
Take Them-Before-Me, Give-Me A Reason To Not Want-To-Breathe//
I Cant Avoid It Anymore, Its Time-For-Me//
Its Time To Go-To-Sleep And Live In The Rhelm Of Dark-For-Me//
Its Time To Watch-Me-Bleed As I Lay On-The-Floor-As-I-Weep//
Say Goodbye-For-Me, Its Done-For-Me Sincerly-A2Z//


[hook]
[breathy] It slips away....
[background] I can feel it plummet from my fingers theres no reason left for me...im sorry to those ive hurt but it has to be this way
[breathy] It slips away...
[background] The knife is my relief, as i slice my vein, i know i will meet my fate...im sorry to those ive hurt but it has to be this way
[repeat]



IM NOT DONE YET, BUT TO THOSE WHO HAVE READ THE INCOMPLETE VERSION GIVE ME FFEDBACK ON THAT!

Nice shit right here A2Z...keep spittin man...give me a im...Talk about a crew situation alright

s'okay lines lenght and flow needs work but it was allright...................

yo reach, actually it flows quite nicely iff ya put it to the beat i said

yo thun line for line dat shit was off da meter can't wait to here it on audio or something keep it poppin thun 1