xl4real vs mc aines
 

5 bars 10 lines max
no crew votes
no dr votes
no friends votes
constructive critism only
Both spit within the hour or no battle.

Check in dude!!!!

yo vote on my battle wod lyrical disaster
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you spit first im just waitin 2 hear your shit take it easy im a newcomer,how long you gonna take 2 post yours hurry up man i aint got long

holla bak

if you aint got long spit now ok, im at work so I'll fill mine in as and when I can but within the hour!!!!

alright man im just workin ma shit i will spit mine a.s.a.p but it will b within the hour

holla bak

ok man but I hope you aint pre written when you say your working your shit, its freestyle or nada.............................................. .............................

yeah yeah man ive nearly got mine just finishin it off how much longer is it gona b 2 drop ya shit,i will drop mmine a.s.a.p

holla bak

write man heres ma shit its quick and 2 the point tho so here
it goes

im hard to kill
lyricalves gotta ma grill im invinsible
ive got this appetite 4 smashin the mic
DESTROY my enemies
i haunt you scar you 4 life
i kill you

there you go xl4real ive dun and dropped my shit no its ur turn 2 drop urs dont no show and remember u sed within the hour so hurry the fuck up and holla bak

peace out

LYnx FX 4 LIFe

cum on man you avin a no show?u sed within the hour so hurry up and spit ya shit BITch,
you set this shit up u wanted da match now ur not showin,wat the fuck wit that?

u aint xl4real ur XL4Fake cos uve ran and gone offline like a pussy,wots with that shit,u gotta spit ya shit u sed within the hour dawg so hurry da fuck up

STARTER

MC aines you need to go on da weight gain::Cuz you battlin EXTRA LARGE a vet in da game.
Ya trip up on stage over micraphone leads::Cuz your blind, cant see the sign, NO WACK MC's.
I dunno why you even thought you could have a chance against
me::Cuz obvious you aint got a clue and your new to RB.

MAIN COURSE

I would tear your brain out if it were there to tear::I almost pitty you aines seeing your look of dispare.
You up to your neck in this proverbial shit::Your gonna choke and drown, in your own spit.
So after you loose please tell me what you make of this::I smell the piss from your pants as I spit my GENESIS.

DESERT

You fracture your own bones with unknown undertones::You bitch, you dont rap with high traces of feremones.
You accidently went mentally ill in the head recently::You must be fucking mad or sad to wanna peice of me.
Im not fucking around with this round, cuz you said you were down::But I ment us to battle so why you kneeling on the ground?
I said no dick riding so get the fuck off my dick::You little ho, bitch, pussy ass, little gay faggot, prick!!!

Ok man your go!!!! not my best or nowt!!!

For fuck sake why you battlin if you aint gonna try, you wastin my time you daft cunt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyways uppin this shit so I can get rid of it and move on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aight man dat was ma first battle lets av a rematch sumtime and i wil blow you the mo fuck away, i will give it ya there were sum tight lyrics in that holla bk

i can't vote but if i cud then i wud go with mc aines cos his structure and lyrics were ill:

"im hard to kill lyricalves gotta ma grill im invinsible" basically sayin, ya can't touch me and even if you do it wont hurt me....

"ive got this appetite 4 smashin the mic" this is a nice line, gud multi used, im feelin that bit.
"DESTROY my enemies i haunt you scar you 4 life" this is the best bit in da whole battle. scar you for life, that shit is mind blowin. I'll spit these lyrics that'll scar u and haunt you, im luvin that,brilliant word play and flow.
"i kill you" dont know what that was for but i suppose it was just finishin it off.

like he sed, it was to the point and the lyrics were fuckin mean.

XL4REAL was nice and had sum disses in his but i just prefered readin mc aines..........................no hate or d/r

PEACE............................................. FIORI