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Kosta 07-24-03 03:19 PM

Sand vs Franchi$e
 
10 Lines.
Blah.

Kosta 07-24-03 04:03 PM

on the real seriously kid, this is a stupid battle why am i doin' it-
are you fuckin' nuts? or you just don't know who ya screwin with-
must be on some loser shit - stop spitten, take ya jaw out-
ya verse? kid i'll crack ya structure like angry teenagers in they
ma's house- ouch - your mom's a nobody. . . believe me
so that explains that saying...uhh....-nothing comes easy-...
hehe- your a herb, for real ;)...your even terrible at best
and stevie, your name fits you - you make your life on the net
so go right ahead, pre-write, bite - matter fact don't post duck
- put ya lip gloss on as well - cuz you will always suck...;) blah



so get off my nuts

Oxygen 07-24-03 04:05 PM

Fuck You u punkass bitch
Fuck Slugs i got a lyrical switch
Fuck Me is what ya thinking fo i leav ya ass in a ditch.
Check it...

this guy wouldn't be dope if i pumped crack through his blood.
cuz eva made u "cry her a river" why his flowz are "mud".
its obivous ya text stlye is old look at ya losses u should retire.
if i torched ya vocal chordz u still wouldn't spit fire.
ya career is over u got murked befo u even showed up.
u put dynamite in your record ya to say it blowed up.
ya girl told me ya waz a pussy that why you couldnt cum wit it.
she said she wouldn't get in it so u smacked her to say u hit it.
u could neva have a career like flubber it just flop.
u through ya album at da celing to say it hit da top.

Fuck You u punkass bitch
Fuck Slugs i got a lyrical switch
Fuck Me is what ya thinking fo i leav ya ass in a ditch.

Oxygen 07-24-03 04:10 PM

edited 4 mistakez
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and any one that no's sand no's that he used to have
fuck u fuck slug fuck me. in his sig

Phrantik 07-24-03 04:13 PM

Quote:
ma's house- ouch - your mom's a nobody. . . believe me
so that explains that saying...uhh....-nothing comes easy-...


actually made me chuckle. it was game over right there.
vote sand. he just killed him with that line... hahahha.

Caramac 07-24-03 04:14 PM

Damn, sand took this in my opinion, just a few less played punches / wordplay in his verse, the whole "sucking / lipgloss" thing was kinda played but this was dope:
Quote:
on the real seriously kid, this is a stupid battle why am i doin' it-
are you fuckin' nuts? or you just don't know who ya screwin with

^ Heh, nice one sand, good little flip there. .
Quote:
ma's house- ouch - your mom's a nobody. . . believe me
so that explains that saying...uhh....-nothing comes easy...

^ Again, nice wordplay working in nicely with the punch.

Sand just came nicer IMO, less played, nicer punches, more original.

Vote: Sand

~HoTTie~ 07-24-03 04:15 PM

my vote goes to franchise..neither one of u came ur hardest but he won it...he had better punches wordplay..etc....

sand...try not to make it sound so newbieish like ur tryin so hard to rhyme...example:

on the real seriously kid, this is a stupid battle why am i doin' it-
are you fuckin' nuts? or you just don't know who ya screwin with-



^^newbieish.....don't do that

Phrantik 07-24-03 04:21 PM

lmao at "hotty7" tellin sand what is and isnt newbish..
go hang yourself. never tell someone who can eat your
babies they are newbish. its just asking to be sonned.

selecta!!!!!!!! 07-24-03 04:24 PM

craig
 
yo safe its selecta help me the fuck out here
this is well fucked ya get me ive gota type 100 characters to get throught to ya hurry up and send me sum shit ok dope

Kosta 07-24-03 04:26 PM

lmao @ hottie 7

jesus christ shawdy, stand up and get some guaze
and wipe the blood out of your asshole...you ride more
rb newbie cock than farmers that feel it necessary to
get in touch and aid in the hatching of eggs you dumbfuck
so uhh before you continue and re-read and start
to feel his verse more again. get in touch with reality....pz

Dez 07-24-03 04:26 PM

Sand quarter-assed this and i think it costed it him the battle...

Sand

on the real seriously kid, this is a stupid battle why am i doin' it-
are you fuckin' nuts? or you just don't know who ya screwin with-

^no

must be on some loser shit - stop spitten, take ya jaw out-
ya verse? kid i'll crack ya structure like angry teenagers in they
ma's house- ouch - your mom's a nobody. . . believe me
so that explains that saying...uhh....-nothing comes easy-...

^played. and a "your mom" line?


hehe- your a herb, for real ...your even terrible at best
and stevie, your name fits you - you make your life on the net
so go right ahead, pre-write, bite - matter fact don't post duck
- put ya lip gloss on as well - cuz you will always suck... blah

^these were alright... but you didnt really bring any heat


Franchise

this guy wouldn't be dope if i pumped crack through his blood.
cuz eva made u "cry her a river" why his flowz are "mud".

^decent. only real personal in this battle.

its obivous ya text stlye is old look at ya losses u should retire.
if i torched ya vocal chordz u still wouldn't spit fire.

^played.

ya career is over u got murked befo u even showed up.
u put dynamite in your record ya to say it blowed up.
ya girl told me ya waz a pussy that why you couldnt cum wit it.
she said she wouldn't get in it so u smacked her to say u hit it.

^played.


u could neva have a career like flubber it just flop.
u through ya album at da celing to say it hit da top.

^mediocre.


i think we all know that Sand is better than this...but what he posted was just...ughh. if he wouldve brought what he is capable of he definately wouldve won...but he didnt. Franchise your verse wasnt steller either.. it was just a tad better..

vote=Franchise

Oxygen 07-24-03 04:29 PM

g00d battle neither of us were tryin............................................. ...
.................................................. ...o well it coulda been a lot betta......

that waz only 15% of my skill

Sureal 07-24-03 04:34 PM

Ok What The Fuck, Franchise'z Verse Was Shit, Sands Was Also Shit.. But Franchise 'z Was More Shitty..

Wordplay: SAND
Multies n shit: No-ONE
Flow: SAND
Punches: Sand

Vote Sand

ToNe-E 07-24-03 04:35 PM

Vote - Sand ..


Why? Cause he's Cool ..

Biaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatch

Pz



100 characterz weEEEEeee

Oxygen 07-24-03 04:42 PM

^ lol yea i also vote sand. J/K................................................. .........
................................W/E win or lose i dont care..............................
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